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Morning Breath

I take in the morning's last breath, it's fleeting hour, surrounded, by little whispers of thought, I swear, will lead me to where, the rivers run too deep, but, here I am, dipping my feet, while the rest of the world, is left suspended in peaceful keep.

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Date: 4/1/2024 6:47:00 AM
Dear Kate, What a tranquil journey into the depths of introspection, where the dawn's whispers guide us to unexplored realms. I loved how your words weave a delicate contemplation, inviting us to linger in the quiet moments before the day fully awakens. Kate, through your poetic lens, I feel the gentle tug of curiosity beckoning me to dip my toes into the unknown currents of thought. This is a serene reflection on the stillness that surrounds us amidst the bustle of life. - Blessings, Daniel
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