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I’ll speak of me past, of stories once told. Of men that rode waves out in the cold. Tales of the strong, the courageous, the bold. Most of them died young, a few were quite old. The things that they done sent chills up my spine. They’d eat mush and swill and drink rum and wine. When they were happy, they had a swagger. When they were drunk, they could barely stagger. Over and over to battle they’d go, They’d fight dragons and monsters, toe to toe. They faced their sure death with almost no fear, They’d charge into battle with a loud cheer. They looked for treasure, none was ever found. Pirates ‘til death, by their pledge they were bound.

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Date: 2/26/2024 10:52:00 AM
You tell this story just the way it was likely. It's such a pleasure to follow politely. Each stanza approached with without any dread...the reading so easy agrees with my head.
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Date: 2/26/2024 9:24:00 PM
We're alike in that the rhymes just come out when they want to, Duke. Bill
Date: 2/24/2024 12:52:00 PM
Adventure poem that thrills my sense of history. Thank you. The accompanying picture is delightful.
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Date: 2/24/2024 2:13:00 PM
Thanks for the visit and comment, Hilda. Have a nice day. Bill
Date: 2/24/2024 10:34:00 AM
You write sonnets so well my friend.. This sonnet offers a captivating glimpse into the world of seafaring adventurers and the timeless allure of the pirate's life. Its vivid imagery, themes of bravery and boldness, and rhythmic structure combine to create a compelling and memorable exploration of the human spirit in the face of adventure and adversity... Awesome!
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Date: 2/24/2024 11:23:00 AM
Thanks for the uplifting comments, Silent One, it's always a pleasure to read your comments and your poetry. Have a pleasant weekend, my friend. Bill
Date: 2/24/2024 7:04:00 AM
It is a delightful experience to read your splendid composition, dear friend Bill. Your mastery of sonnets is truly commendable. This vibrant sonnet possesses a profound quality deserving of immense admiration. It resonates as a tribute to the valiant souls who endured arduous lives.
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Date: 2/24/2024 10:06:00 AM
Thanks, my friend. Your comments are always a pleasure to read. Have a nice day. Bill
Date: 2/24/2024 6:13:00 AM
This reads like an ode to those brave men--it was not an easy life, So well described, Bill.
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Date: 2/24/2024 10:07:00 AM
Thanks for commenting, my friend. Bill
Date: 2/24/2024 6:09:00 AM
Thieves of the sea. Killers and plunderers. Still, I suppose they had some redeeming qualities. Maybe they loved their mothers lol. Neat sonnet Bill
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Date: 2/24/2024 10:09:00 AM
One good deed covers a multitude of sins. Probably did something in their lives that was good. Thanks for the visit and comment, Tommy. Have a pleasant day, my friend. Bill
Date: 2/24/2024 5:50:00 AM
You are great where sonnets are concerned. This is a lively Texan sonnet worthy of great adulation.
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Date: 2/24/2024 10:20:00 AM
Me mates made me write it. Thanks for the visit and comments, Victor. Have a pleasant weekend, my friend. Bill
Date: 2/24/2024 5:20:00 AM
This one fine Sonnet, Bill! What a life pirates must have led. Jean Lafitte had a stronghold very near where I grew up. Good writing!
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Date: 2/24/2024 10:24:00 AM
That's interesting. A pirate as a neighbor. Thanks for the visit and comments, Lin, always a pleasure to read your comments. Have a pleasant weekend, my Milton Creek new friend, Bill
Date: 2/24/2024 4:29:00 AM
Pleasure reading your awesome write. Blessings
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Date: 2/24/2024 11:06:00 AM
Thanks for the visit and comment, Yolanda. Enjoy your weekend, Bill
Date: 2/24/2024 2:03:00 AM
As well as the western genre I love tales of the sea. Funny thing I finally read Treasure Island when I was away, I'd been putting it off for years. Pieces of eight, pieces of eight lol. Tom
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Date: 2/24/2024 11:05:00 AM
Good for you, it's hard to take the time to go back and experience some of those things we meant to do earlier in our lives. It's usually well worth the effort. It's also fun to go back and watch reruns of classic movies. We like to do that sometimes. Cheers, my friend! Bill
Date: 2/23/2024 10:22:00 PM
Aaaarrrrgggghhhh! The Good Old Days! Enjoyed it Bill...
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Date: 2/24/2024 11:02:00 AM
Thanks, Robert, me mates made me write it. lol Have a great weekend, my friend. Bill
Date: 2/23/2024 8:08:00 PM
Most excellent sonnet. Maybe when you wrote this you were listening to Sea Shanty music or playing Pirates of the Carribean?
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Date: 2/23/2024 9:32:00 PM
Both would put me in the mood. lol Thanks for the comments, Miranda. Have a pleasant weekend, my friend. Bill

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