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I decided to try a new form of poetry today. I hope you like it.

loving caring giving sharing he’s a very loving, caring, man and known for his giving, sharing, plan

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 10/30/2023 3:32:00 PM

Hi Bill. You have me smiling because I see this entry as two folded. I see it pertaining to you and yes God. Take your pick but both you and he apply to the words you state. This is lovely and positive. Finally when I read your words my dad comes to mind because he too was all that you state. Have a beautiful night. I hope all is well. Peace and Blessings to you and Sara. (smile) PS - Its always good to try new formats.

Bill Baker
Date: 10/30/2023 8:21:00 PM

I agree, it applies to everyone that is sharing the Love. Man or woman in my opinion. The new forms of poetry are fun every once in a while; I still like my sonnets and haikus though. Having a pleasant week, my friend. Bill

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

Date: 10/25/2023 12:01:00 PM

CHAPEAU...! He is trully a wonderful man if his plan is caring, giving and living. I wish we had many like that man. Thank you Bill for sharing such a nice jewel. A friend from Spain takes the hat off... Blessings my friend...!

Bill Baker
Date: 10/26/2023 1:47:00 PM

Thank you, dear Maria. Your visits and comments are appreciated, my friend. Bill

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/23/2023 11:11:00 AM

Amen, Bill! You have put "his...plan" into a lovely nutshell - one to easily take with us on our pilgrimage through life. You did a wonderful joy with your efforts at a new form! Blessings to you my poet friend!

Bill Baker
Date: 10/23/2023 4:17:00 PM

Thank you, Sam, for the visit and kind comments, my friend. It is an unusual form and somewhat limiting, but I did enjoy trying a new form and will use it again. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 10/22/2023 11:04:00 PM

love is caring feeling of nature; it's natural; beautiful Tyburn poem

Bill Baker
Date: 10/23/2023 8:43:00 AM

Thanks for the visits and comments, Mahtab. This was my first Tyburn, but there will be more. :-) A poet friend to be! Bill

Edward Ibeh

Date: 10/22/2023 2:20:00 PM

I've written a few of these couple of years back. Awesome first try, Bill:-) Thanks for reminding me to write more!

Bill Baker
Date: 10/22/2023 5:23:00 PM

I saw that someone had a contest for these in2018. Kim Rodrigues, I think, or she wrote one for a contest. Thanks for the visit and comment, my friend. Bill

Emilia James

Date: 10/21/2023 10:43:00 AM

I have not heard of this form before and will give it a try. Yours is wonderful. Have a good weekend Bill. Emilia : )

Bill Baker
Date: 10/21/2023 2:52:00 PM

Thank you, Amilia, I ran across it looking at old poems' others have written. It is very restrictive and requires each line to have a set number of syllables and an exact position for some words in the poem. I may run a contest for this form later. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Silent One

Date: 10/21/2023 2:35:00 AM

interesting form.. maybe you should do a contest on it? Seems like something you would have for breakfast Bill..

Bill Baker
Date: 10/21/2023 2:54:00 PM

Interesting thought, Silent One ... I may give it a try. I haven't run a contest before, but have the background to judge one, I'm sure. Thanks for the comments and the encouragement to try something different, my friend. Bill

Aurore Severo

Date: 10/21/2023 12:49:00 AM

Very lovely!

Bill Baker
Date: 10/21/2023 1:16:00 AM

Thank you for visiting and commenting on my poetry, Aurore. Have a great weekend! Bill

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 10/20/2023 8:53:00 PM

It can be fun to learn a new type of poetry, this is so sweet, made me smile~

Bill Baker
Date: 10/20/2023 9:10:00 PM

It was invigorating to try a new form of poetry today, Michelle. Thanks for the uplifting comment, my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

I Am Anaya

Date: 10/20/2023 7:28:00 PM

Bill, I've never heard of this form, I guess I'm not expanding enough. I sure heard of the One you speak of. Just wondering, even if no caps, I think it's only when we re writing about (Him) then it's caps. This way we know for sure your speaking of God. :)

Bill Baker
Date: 10/20/2023 8:13:00 PM

I just learned of it today. Thought I'd give it a try. Have a great day! Bill

Yann Rolland

Date: 10/20/2023 7:09:00 PM

a man , we can count on, nice portrait yann

Bill Baker
Date: 10/20/2023 8:13:00 PM

Thanks for the comment, Yann. Have a great weekend, my friend. Bill

Stephan McBride

Date: 10/20/2023 6:20:00 PM

Love it, this is great

Bill Baker
Date: 10/20/2023 8:15:00 PM

Thanks, Stephan, my first try at a Tyburn. An unusual form of poetry. Thanks for the visit and comment, my friend. Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/20/2023 5:15:00 PM

I wasn't aware of this form of poetry until you shared it with me. Looking at the criteria, it appears as if you successfully wrote your first Tyburn. You're a courageous and creative poet. I like this creation. Hugs, me :-)

Bill Baker
Date: 10/20/2023 8:12:00 PM

Thank you, Sara, for the visits and comments. You're the best! Big hugs, Bill