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Lead Weight

That leaden feeling Where all of the uncried tears Take up all the space

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Peter Rees

Date: 2/24/2023 1:58:00 AM

Oh dear, feeling a little down are we? Enveloped in negativity to the exclusion of anything happy, not even a smile ? So much crying to be done, it’s heartbreaking. Such depth of emotion in so few words.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 2/24/2023 2:08:00 AM

It was the other day, so I shall leave it there but for the existence of a poem capturing it.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/17/2023 1:57:00 AM

There is a depth of meaning in your haiku.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 2/17/2023 2:14:00 AM

Thank you Victor, I appreciate you taking the time to comment. The majority of my poems are written from a current emotional space.

Paige Hind

Date: 2/16/2023 2:02:00 PM

This is amazing!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 2/16/2023 2:40:00 PM

Thank you

Eve Roper

Date: 2/16/2023 11:58:00 AM

Beautiful, so much meaning in this verse.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 2/16/2023 2:40:00 PM

Thank you