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Jimerick - Addicted To Computer Games

At gaming, Jim soon became deft But the obsession has left him bereft It caused so much strife And destroyed his own life But it's ok, he's got three lives left.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 7/9/2017 6:50:00 AM
Fun one :)
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Date: 7/8/2017 4:34:00 PM
bah ha ha ha this is so so funny Ray:-) hugs Jan xx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/8/2017 4:52:00 PM
Jim committed his heart and his soul,Spent all life on his games console, He was starting to smell,And his home life was hell,When his wife called him a dumb azzhole
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Ray Gridley
Date: 7/8/2017 4:41:00 PM
He he Jan. Beware of computer games!