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Is This My Room?

This empty room white walls, floors no doors quite frightful an empty room without emotion to share perhaps if I keep on talking my words might spare some thought to stop it feeling quite so bare this empty room isn't so empty with me in it but for the life of me I cannot see this being my room with it's blank white walls, floors and no exit.

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Date: 7/3/2024 1:35:00 PM
I've had this nightmare and it's very perplexing. I hope you aren't terrified. My hope is that you may find a window for pizza delivery. Just something familiar for comfort.
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Date: 7/1/2024 3:02:00 PM
Perfectly executed to create a boxed in feel and contained panic. Well written
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Kate Davies
Date: 7/1/2024 9:25:00 PM
Thanks :) Glad you enjoyed it and really appreciate the kind words!

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