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Rivers and Streams | River-Lake-Ocean-Streams.jpg50.jpg | painting ...

the river spoke to me ride my current to the sea join my adventure

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Joe Maverick

Date: 1/11/2024 11:44:00 PM

Tearing along in burbling song as all water Ever; no rights or wrongs! Good one Bill'

Bill Baker
Date: 1/12/2024 5:29:00 PM

Thanks, Joe, for the visits and comments, my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Arlo Parker

Date: 1/3/2024 9:21:00 AM

Love it!!! Adventure awaits, Texas Bill. :o)

Bill Baker
Date: 1/3/2024 4:47:00 PM

I'd love to go canoeing there. Thanks for the visit and comments, my friend. Have a pleasant evening! Bill

Silent One

Date: 1/3/2024 6:46:00 AM

Nice on Bill.. You are doing these short forms very well..

Bill Baker
Date: 1/3/2024 4:49:00 PM

Thanks, I'm already getting tired of them. LOL I'll probably switch back to longer one next week. Just trying something different this week. I hope your new year is going well. Bill

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/2/2024 9:54:00 PM

Count me in Bill. Tom

Bill Baker
Date: 1/2/2024 10:30:00 PM

It will be an exciting adventure, my friend. Thanks for the comments, Tom. Cheers! Bill

Tom Woody

Date: 1/2/2024 3:15:00 PM

And bring yer fishin' pole! Nice senryu Bill. We're naturally drawn to water.

Bill Baker
Date: 1/2/2024 6:10:00 PM

I agree, spent my first (9 months) in water. :-) I do like many facets of water, especially flowing. Thanks for the comments, Tommy. Have a pleasant day. Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/2/2024 2:59:00 PM

a lovely Senyru, Bill. I like the notion of the river speaking suggesting a ride on the current--that's profound and wise, hugs, your eastside writing bear

Bill Baker
Date: 1/2/2024 6:11:00 PM

Thanks for the comment, Sara. I've heard the river speak. Your truelove and westside writing bear, Bill

Terry Flood

Date: 1/2/2024 2:38:00 PM

Smashing write, Bill. You may have just inspired Rim n Raisin 15. Happy new year to you. Terry

Bill Baker
Date: 1/2/2024 6:12:00 PM

Oh! Another chapter. Great! Thanks for the comments, my friend. Cheers! Bill

I Am Anaya

Date: 1/2/2024 1:50:00 PM

I would join such a beautiful journey as this one, Bill. Thanks for being an awesome poetry friend. Anaya

Bill Baker
Date: 1/2/2024 6:19:00 PM

I do love the sounds of nature, especially running river water and waterfalls. Thanks for the visit and comments, my friend. Have a pleasant day! Bill

Stephan McBride

Date: 1/2/2024 11:52:00 AM

Beautiful picture, love your poem to enhance this adventure,

Bill Baker
Date: 1/2/2024 6:21:00 PM

Thanks for the comment, Stephan. Happy New Year! Have a great 2024! Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/2/2024 11:21:00 AM

I have your "Invitation" and ready to join your adventure. When do we leave??? A Beautiful Picture... Have a great day writing away.................

Bill Baker
Date: 1/2/2024 11:30:00 AM

:-) I need an adventure this year. I hope we both have one here at Poetry Soup, my friend. Happy New Year! Paula. Smiles ~ Blessings from your poet friend in Texas. Bill

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/2/2024 10:50:00 AM

Bill, your Senryu is truly remarkable. The way you have crafted this poem, it is evident that you have beautifully captured a vivid image in your mind with your carefully chosen words. It seems as though the river has whispered its secrets to you, inviting you to embark on a thrilling journey alongside its current towards the vastness of the sea. May this new year bring you an auspicious beginning.

Bill Baker
Date: 1/2/2024 10:58:00 AM

Thank you, my dear friend, for the thoughtful comments that accompany your visits. It's been a good year and I'm glad I have friends like you. Happy New Year! Have a great 2024! Bill & Sara Baker