Get Your Premium Membership


In deep awareness, I drowned into dreaming in the velvet sky,
Liberated from well defined fantasy to find truth in love.
A twist from one commotion to another hanging above,
Her wild smile declared reality through my hazel eyes.
I scowled to stop her for her tease,
But she faded from the scene with speed.
To avenge these cracked ribs in overwhelming reality,
Ruthlessly, I smother this fantasy.

Yearning for our new togetherness,
Will she consider me above her likeness?
She beclouds me with ravening emotion 
Deeper within, I was inflamed with infatuation

It is love that rejects all known breakthrough;
I am seeking divine ways to make a happy view.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

Post Comments
Please Login to post a comment
Date: 1/6/2012 8:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poem this week Qlajide. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 6/21/2011 1:34:00 PM
Congrats Olajide on your win in this contest with this wonderful write..gautami
Login to Reply
Date: 6/19/2011 5:39:00 AM
This is extra-ordinary! Congrats on your well deserved win.cheers bro
Login to Reply
Date: 6/7/2011 10:26:00 AM
What an outstanding poem!! Congratulations !!!!
Login to Reply
Date: 6/7/2011 5:15:00 AM
Great read
Login to Reply
Date: 6/6/2011 8:43:00 PM
Glad to share the spotlight with such a fine write! Congrad's LIght & Love
Login to Reply
Date: 6/6/2011 10:15:00 AM
congrats on your first place win in the contest with this fascinating entry...luv..
Login to Reply
Date: 11/9/2010 2:41:00 PM
You are truly gifted. This piece is a work of art. I absolutely love it! Great work!
Login to Reply
Date: 10/4/2010 2:04:00 PM
This sure is a heartfelt piece, Olusegun and the words you used here sure are touching...tugs at the heartstrings...sending you soupmail after this-- nikko :)
Login to Reply
Date: 9/11/2010 5:32:00 AM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned in this one..Glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 9/7/2010 12:32:00 PM
Well written!
Login to Reply
Date: 9/6/2010 2:16:00 AM
much to ponder here, very moving, love this poem. Harry
Login to Reply
Date: 9/2/2010 12:33:00 PM
Infatuation the catalyst to many broken hearts.. Enjoyed your write ~ Wilma
Login to Reply
Date: 9/2/2010 10:57:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Words. I will not be reading poetry for a few days as I will be gone from Friday until Monday. I look forward to reading more of your poetry when I return. I wish you a weekend filled with good health, love, and loads of inspiration. Love and Blessings, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 9/2/2010 10:23:00 AM
Infatuations can lead to much fantasy -- the "what ifs" in life. It's good you are "seeking divine ways" to find happiness. Many times infatuations can lead to heartache. Very moving poem, Adalene! Love, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 9/2/2010 9:05:00 AM
nice one, much enjoyed
Login to Reply
Date: 9/2/2010 8:58:00 AM
the best thing i have read in a long time, i LOVE the rhyme, absolutely wonderful thanx loads for sharing! ^^,)
Login to Reply