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In His Presence

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Though alone, he appeared day after day. We couldn’t see him, and he could not stay. Reverently, we each began to pray, listening quietly for what he would say. Then we’d just know in an unknown way. We knew somehow, we’d not be led astray. Like fresh fruit, his words before us he’d lay, then deep in our hearts, we’d place them to stay. Who was this presence we felt every day? Why not reveal himself and with us stay? We still ask these questions each time we pray, listening quietly for what he will say. We have faith again he will come our way, and trust his answers won’t lead us astray.

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Regina Elliott

Date: 3/14/2024 3:18:00 PM

Awesomely beauteous Christ-centered poem, Bill. So wonderfully penned. Have a blessed Texas March evening with Sara. ~

Bill Baker
Date: 3/14/2024 3:34:00 PM

Thanks, my friend, Regina. Your kind comments are always a blessing to read. Have a pleasant evening, my friend. Bill

Stephan McBride

Date: 3/13/2024 7:41:00 AM

??Acts 17:28 KJVAAE?? [28] for in him we live, and move, and have our being; as certain also of your own poets have said, For we are also his offspring. A poet of God you are my friend, blessings to you and Sara, what a treasure you two have to share, to both seek the true treasures of God within that spreads throughout all : )

Bill Baker
Date: 3/14/2024 3:37:00 PM

Thank you for the thoughtful comments, my brother in Christ. It's a joy to have you visit and comment on our poetry. May your life be blessed as we await His return. Bill & Sara Baker

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/12/2024 6:36:00 AM

The mystery of the invisible trinity, visible in prayer and faith. We remind ourselves, lest we forget, of past events where God is fully apparent. We remember that every day our very breath, the beating of our hearts show us that He lives.

Bill Baker
Date: 3/12/2024 6:55:00 PM

So, true, Kim. I'm thankful the moment I awake, for another day of life. I'm surprised I'm still here, but He must have a reason with all he's done to keep me alive. I really pushed the envelope a few times while in the military. Oh God! How great thou art. Blessings, Bill

Valsa George

Date: 3/11/2024 11:02:00 PM

A beautiful sonnet as ever. His unseen presence can only be felt. But the messages He gives can be heard and sensed. They will guide us and lead us. We won't go astray if we listen to them. Have a happy week ahead with your dear Sara.

Bill Baker
Date: 3/12/2024 6:56:00 PM

Thanks for the confirming thoughts, my dear friend, Valsa. I hope your week is filled with blessings. Bill

Tonye George

Date: 3/11/2024 5:04:00 PM

His answers are the path we need to grow, we just need to listen and be able to discern.

Bill Baker
Date: 3/12/2024 6:57:00 PM

I pray for the gift of discernment often, Tonye. It seems to be the greatest gift we can have after salvation. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Josefina Costales

Date: 3/10/2024 9:06:00 PM

To have faith in his presence to guide us is why we won’t get lost or not lead astray. Be not faithless, but believing. Thanks for the enlightening words,

Bill Baker
Date: 3/11/2024 5:40:00 AM

Thank you, Josefina, for a first visit and comment on my poetry. I hope you'll come again soon. I'll be visiting yours later today. Have a pleasant day! Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/10/2024 4:44:00 PM

The 'Serenity Prayer' is one of my favorites. Thanks for including it with this poem. What a serene and reverent Sonnet, Bill. Faith is believing in Him even though we can't see him. Faith is believing in our heart of hearts that he won't let us astray, listening quietly for what he has to say. Softly powerful and enriching words, dear hubby. Sonnets are your forte...hugs, me

Bill Baker
Date: 3/12/2024 6:58:00 PM

Thanks, you for the lovely comments of encouragement, Sara. You're the best! Bill

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/10/2024 2:35:00 PM

Beautifully written, with intricate symbolism and eloquent diction, Bill. I admire the way your sonnet explores the mysterious aura that influences the characters' lives, inspiring feelings of wonder and respect. The recurring theme of silently seeking direction emphasizes the profound spiritual quest embarked upon by the characters.

Bill Baker
Date: 3/12/2024 6:59:00 PM

Thank you for your deep and meaningful comment, my dear friend. You are a blessing to my life. Have a great week! Bill

Silent One

Date: 3/10/2024 12:04:00 PM

Hey bill, I really like how your sonnet delves into the enigmatic presence that graces the lives of the speakers, evoking a sense of awe and reverence. The repeated refrain of listening quietly for guidance underscores the deep spiritual journey undertaken by the individuals, suggesting a profound yearning to commune with a higher power.

Bill Baker
Date: 3/12/2024 7:05:00 PM

I've met with small groups of people of various faiths, religions, and belief systems over the years, but the ones that are seeking truth all seem to resonate with one another in spite of the differences of our backgrounds. It is inspiring to know that what can reach a man soul touches everyone the same. In this world we have "universal" which are events that happen in all societies; in the spiritual world it is a knowing that reaches all of creation. those are the things I hold most dear. Blessings my dear friend. Bill