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A key to unlock the heart in loving thought to impart of simple words two lovebird simply find a way..... A simple wish A wish of love A simple love To wish upon To hold you near To let you in To let you hold Me once again I open up A heart of fear With opened eyes A love so dear This loving moment Held deep within Within a moment Gone again A simple wish A wish of love A simple love To wish upon I open up A heart of fear With opened eyes A love so dear

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/8/2016 10:42:00 PM

Rick, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by and enjoy my latest blog "It's Over." always & forever ~LINDA~

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/13/2014 6:10:00 AM

Nicely crafted poem, should have been placed higher, congrats on the win

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/2/2014 8:43:00 PM

This poem hugs the reader and they can only hug back the poet in the spirit of love.

Debra Squyres

Date: 11/2/2014 12:01:00 PM

These short verses pack a lot in them... deep thoughts went into this I'm sure.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/1/2014 2:03:00 PM

Such a tender romantic write Rick:-) its a 7 from me! Hugs Jan xx

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/1/2014 1:21:00 PM

A simple wish, a wish of love...very nice poetic lines Rick... I enjoyed it your beautiful poem! This one gets a 7! There's no higher rating here at the soup, which is a pity! Cheers! ; xxx D.