Home » Poems » Kate Davies » I Have an Audience

I Have an Audience

Cobwebs, settle on my tongue, lines of sodden caramel, stick in their formation, clapping, to each considered fiction, protruding from, my gum.

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/4/2024 11:46:00 AM

Dear Kate, your poem captures the weight of unspoken words, like cobwebs settling on the tongue. The imagery of sodden caramel lines and considered fiction is hauntingly vivid. It's a powerful portrayal of the struggle to articulate thoughts. Brilliantly evocative. - Blessings, Daniel

Kate Davies
Date: 3/13/2024 12:28:00 AM

Thank you Daniel I'm really glad you liked it, thanks for reading :)

Kate Davies
Date: 3/13/2024 12:06:00 AM

Thank you Daniel I'm really glad you liked it, thanks for reading :)