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a black crow swoops low the brisk autumn morn deceives-- a yellow leaf floats... ___________________________ A great memory ( so vivid ) A clear crisp Fall morning as I peered from my window ~ one old crow darted from his high perch ~ A morning treat, a meal. Only to quickly call off the hunt with a haphazard reckless turn to the west ~ one single falling leaf, quite deceitful........ To: P.D.

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Date: 9/15/2018 4:56:00 PM
This made me smile. Animals have their challenges too! A beautiful haiku Rick! Congratulations on your third placement!
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Date: 9/14/2018 9:43:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Rick.
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Date: 5/23/2015 11:36:00 AM
deep and sweet
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Date: 9/28/2011 8:44:00 AM
Dear Rick, ( again ) * here is another contest I did not congratulate..., stopping by AGAIN to give warm congratulations on my old contest. Sorry, I forgot to leave you a thank you *comment* of appreciation~ I hope you don't mind my copy paste congratulations.. Don't worry I have read this many times. lol. or how else would have I closed it with out reading. Can you accept my apology and old congrats on your poem. .p.d. the late bloomer
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Date: 9/21/2011 3:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest of P.D. "Your (OWN) Favorite Poem" ^Rick. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/20/2011 7:00:00 PM
Congrats Rick on a 5th place win with this awesome poetry my friend.. luv it and u...
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Date: 9/20/2011 12:42:00 PM
Congratultions on the win in the contest of P.D., Rick
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Date: 9/20/2011 12:07:00 PM
Loved this Rick Congratulations
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Date: 7/19/2011 4:37:00 PM
Ahhhhh! This is my kind of Haiku. Rick. Many congrats on your sensational win. Lainie
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Date: 7/19/2011 11:44:00 AM
Congrats Rick on your first place win my friend with another lovely write ..
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Date: 7/19/2011 8:07:00 AM
Nicely done Rick. A Haiku as a Haikuy should be. Congratulations to you
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Date: 7/19/2011 6:43:00 AM
Congrats on 1st Place, Rick. Great haiku. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 7/19/2011 5:43:00 AM
Congratulations ^Rick on your win in Brian Strand's "Poesy"contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/18/2011 11:03:00 PM
nappy to sahre the spot with you, rick...sweetest of cheers to you for the top win! :)huggs!
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Date: 7/18/2011 10:07:00 PM
Congratulations Rick. Love, joyce
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Date: 10/9/2010 10:58:00 PM
nice one Rick, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 10/9/2010 7:32:00 AM
Congratulations Rick on your win in Andrea's Animal Haiku contest >> James
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Date: 10/8/2010 1:31:00 PM
Congrats Rick on your win in Andrea's contest with this very creative piece luv... enjoyed the black crow swooping low.. u enjoy your special win today with luv and happy weekend ..
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Date: 10/8/2010 1:18:00 PM
Ah, I wonder what that crow thought he was chasing, Rick. Excellent haiku! Congrats on your win. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/8/2010 12:33:00 PM
Congrats on your win Rick :)
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Date: 10/8/2010 9:30:00 AM
Congratulations Rick on your win in Andrea Dietrich's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/8/2010 7:59:00 AM
Congratulations Rick on your success in the contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/8/2010 5:45:00 AM
Congratulations on this wellmdeserved win in the contest, Rick
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Date: 10/8/2010 5:30:00 AM
great work!! congrats on the win!!
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Date: 10/8/2010 4:16:00 AM
Congratulatins, Rick. I really liked the imagery of your haiku. Luv, Andrea
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