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Gulag

the ghost mind is a curious space a gulag held in wire haunted huntress, somber sky coldest winter sun defy Cossack, Hessian shadow churn maze of madness, memory burn strung from stars furnace spent eye of ochre deep lament the ghost mind is a curious place a world seized by fire bitter serpent wrap the sea consume my dark mythology and twist the earth with rage and thunder gripping spine dark Jör-mun-gandr blackest coal, listless rise unhurried night un-compromise the ghost mind is a curious space a gulag serpent dream beyond the edge to flick and creep into nightmare, endless sleep earlobe touch, a secret lock a battered ship, a broken dock frenzied ram breath of ice iconoclastic sacrifice the ghost mind is a curious space a gulag held in wire should ever mouth and tail descend and chasm hell on earth offend to open godless martyr mind broken whisper shores unwind then break the seal, raise the priest crack the sky from west to east burn my body ash and bone my shattered soul I shall atone * Jörmungandr (your – mun-gander): Midgard Serpent (also World Serpent) in Norse mythology who encircles the realm of Midgard; the serpent grew to such an enormous size that he encircled the world – which was envisioned as a flat disc - and held his tail in his mouth.

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Date: 1/18/2024 2:49:00 PM
Great free flowing expressives entwine the descriptives you express so well Mat.' The brooding Scheme of this, highlights the brightness we also Have availiable in life to use to good effect In communication through the many artistic Channels extant and most potent.'
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 1/18/2024 8:46:00 PM
thank you joe for the insightful and well articulated comment
Date: 1/12/2024 2:08:00 PM
Dark and ethereal; the rhyme flowed so well and almost lyrical...
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 1/12/2024 9:29:00 PM
thank you kindly paige for the comment
Date: 1/10/2024 11:00:00 AM
I loved the 'dark' and surreal nature of your poem and the repetitive line "ghost mind is a curious space.'' That says so much without having to say so much :-) I call this one brilliant, have a great day, Sara
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 1/10/2024 2:55:00 PM
have a great day as well, thank you for the comment
Date: 1/10/2024 10:56:00 AM
You write dark and deep very well and always a hint of angst in your words..
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 1/10/2024 2:55:00 PM
thank you for the reply
Date: 1/10/2024 12:22:00 AM
I always enjoy a poem that has a bit of mythology in them, yours is brilliant with such descriptive and soul hitting imagery. I especially love the lines “ the ghost mind is a curious place a world seized by fire bitter serpent wrap the sea consume my dark mythology“ just brilliant! And so creative! Pleasure reading your impeccable write.
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 1/10/2024 7:39:00 AM
thank you as always for your kind words - deeply appreciated

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