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Goodbye For Now

White veil, misty eyed
in eternity he lay....

standing silent at his side
head bowed 
pain inside
her mind shadows,
retraces each day....

moments, seasons.... reality sets in.... 
a longing breath for yesterday

goodbye she cries 
as she turns away

emotions lost
a new season dawns                       
a tear falls away....

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Form~Elegy

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/17/2018 9:23:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Rick. Awesome poem.
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Date: 1/13/2018 9:14:00 AM
Congratulations on top honors, Rick! Well done! ...Fran
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Date: 6/30/2011 4:24:00 AM
Congratulations ^Rick for your win in the contest of Brian Strand "Up To Thee". Love, Carol
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Date: 6/11/2011 3:43:00 PM
Hardly ever see this form ...congrats on your BIG win...BG
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Date: 6/10/2011 1:30:00 PM
Painting an elegant picture of sadness with this one, Rick. Congrats on your outstanding win!
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Date: 6/10/2011 9:28:00 AM
Congrad's on this fine write winning. Light & Love
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Date: 6/10/2011 6:06:00 AM
well done rick. 1st rate
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Date: 6/10/2011 5:54:00 AM
Congrats Rick on your first place win in Brians's contest ..so nice to be sharing first with u and Deb luv...
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