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White veil, misty eyed in eternity he lay.... standing silent at his side head bowed pain inside her mind shadows, retraces each day.... moments, seasons.... reality sets in.... a longing breath for yesterday goodbye she cries as she turns away emotions lost a new season dawns a tear falls away.... ___________________________ Form~Elegy

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Date: 1/17/2018 9:23:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Rick. Awesome poem.
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Date: 1/13/2018 9:14:00 AM
Congratulations on top honors, Rick! Well done! ...Fran
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Date: 6/30/2011 4:24:00 AM
Congratulations ^Rick for your win in the contest of Brian Strand "Up To Thee". Love, Carol
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Date: 6/11/2011 3:43:00 PM
Hardly ever see this form ...congrats on your BIG win...BG
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Date: 6/10/2011 1:30:00 PM
Painting an elegant picture of sadness with this one, Rick. Congrats on your outstanding win!
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Date: 6/10/2011 9:28:00 AM
Congrad's on this fine write winning. Light & Love
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Date: 6/10/2011 6:06:00 AM
well done rick. 1st rate
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Date: 6/10/2011 5:54:00 AM
Congrats Rick on your first place win in Brians's contest nice to be sharing first with u and Deb luv...
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