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Goodbye

And so it was that Autumn would die with a gust of wind she said goodbye Of love mortal she sits subdued sipping remnants of death imbued With curtains drawn she lay in rest in silent prose she relived each breath of life abandoned of weary roads where Winter's freeze would glisten alone And so it was that Autumn had gone in the lonely grips of winter without a song

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Date: 9/29/2016 8:59:00 AM
beautiful Rick, once again :) congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 9/29/2016 2:53:00 AM
A unique take on the theme Rick congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/28/2016 11:00:00 PM
Hi Rick, This was so poetic. Congratulations on your 2nd place win.It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 9/28/2016 9:53:00 PM
Congratulations Rick on the placement of the contest. Change of seasons is a form of goodbye.
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Date: 10/19/2014 1:13:00 PM
You make me feel sorry for Autumn Rick, although winters beauty makes me forget that quick enough. Your poem is written very beautifully.
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