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We were getting old, our minds still quite sound Just one more move before we’re glory bound We made the decision to look around For a unique place to build underground It was harder than we thought it would be To find just the place for Sara and me We wanted a place where we could feel free A place close to nature for walks you see A place in the country that had a pond Just a short walk to the woods just beyond To see nature’s beauty, a deer and fawn To watch the sunrise each morning at dawn A quiet place to write, we have surely found We will build our cozy home, underground

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/23/2024 9:13:00 AM

Don't know if this one is based on fact/s or just a work related to seeing an underground home, but if true, I hope it works out just right for you. I would be concerned about moisture problems. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Bill Baker
Date: 3/23/2024 4:01:00 PM

Just a poem about what I was thinking about last week, Sara. I see your point. Have a pleasant day, my friend. Bill

Jay Narain

Date: 3/17/2024 10:38:00 AM

Nice to find a quiet country place with deer and fawn. Serene and soothing morning sunshine will make your day.

Bill Baker
Date: 3/18/2024 8:13:00 AM

A fine place to bond with nature and get inspiration to write poetry. Thanks for your comments, my friend. Have a great week! Bill

Ink Empress

Date: 3/17/2024 7:50:00 AM

How beautiful is that, and so peaceful too, sometimes i long to move to a place faraway from the busy life, and the picture kind of shows exactly where you and sara would love to be together in love in serenity away from all the noise. So gorgeous and sweet my favorite couple. I hope this place would have access to internet. Need you both to be here on soup haha. I love the rhyme and cadence of this poem and how descriptive it is. Nature definitely has a way of healing us all. A fave this is

Bill Baker
Date: 3/18/2024 8:17:00 AM

Just dreaming, Inky. We'd have to have internet, or it would be a "no go"! Thanks for the FAV for this poem, my dear friend. Have a pleasant week! Bill Light to you always.

Silent One

Date: 3/17/2024 7:29:00 AM

This reflective sonnet captures the sentiment of seeking solace and simplicity in the later years of life. It explores the journey of aging and the desire for a tranquil and harmonious existence. The opening lines convey a sense of resolve and determination as they embark on their quest for a new home. The use of rhyme and rhythm lends a sense of momentum to the narrative, drawing the reader into the couple's journey.

Bill Baker
Date: 3/18/2024 8:19:00 AM

We do long for serenity and time in nature, Silent One. Just a dream right now, but we never know what's around the corner in life. Thanks for the visit and comments on my poetry. It's always good to hear from you, my dear friend. Bill

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/17/2024 6:24:00 AM

Much inspiration you convey, my friend--To see nature’s beauty, a deer and fawn To watch the sunrise each morning at dawn---Life is beautiful in dreams so pleasant.

Bill Baker
Date: 3/18/2024 8:20:00 AM

It is Vijay. It never hurts to dream a little. :-) Have a great week, my dear friend. Bill

Marugu Mo

Date: 3/17/2024 2:20:00 AM

Well written sonnet. I presume for things like amenities its quite a task especially when you think of the complexity incorporating them in such a structure. I presume of course maybe am wrong. enjoyed the poem!

Bill Baker
Date: 3/18/2024 8:22:00 AM

Not wrong, Marugu, very right. It takes a lot of time and money to manifest an underground home with all the amenities most of us would like in a dream home. This is just a poem about a dream home in nature. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/16/2024 7:33:00 PM

Sounds cozy, intimate, and romantic. Enjoy. ~ O. Ver Ground

Bill Baker
Date: 3/16/2024 8:52:00 PM

Thanks, gw. Just a thought of a dream home, not really possible unless someone enters me in a LOTTO that wins! lol Have a nice weekend, my friend. BB

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/16/2024 6:21:00 PM

Hello Bill, I love how this is a testament to the adventurous spirit and longing for simplicity. Your poem beautifully captures the desire to find peace and connection with nature as we age gracefully. The imagery of building a cozy home underground evokes a sense of tranquility and contentment, showing us of the importance of embracing life’s simple pleasures. Your words are a gentle invitation to savor the beauty of the natural world and find joy in the journey of aging. - Blessings, Daniel

Bill Baker
Date: 3/16/2024 8:54:00 PM

You may have some psychic talents you're unaware of, Daniel. That or you just get me. lol Thanks for the meaningful comments, my friend. Bill

David Fisher

Date: 3/16/2024 4:42:00 PM

What a good idea, Bill...to get as close to nature as possible. Enjoyed your creative poem!

Bill Baker
Date: 3/16/2024 8:55:00 PM

Thanks, David. We may all be looking for hidden shelter in the future of the world we live in. Have a great weekend, my friend. Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/16/2024 4:26:00 PM

I didn't realize we were moving! This cave, this place underground, sounds tranquil and perfect. I'm ready. Want me to call the movers? :-)

Bill Baker
Date: 3/16/2024 4:29:00 PM

The little bears said they are up for this move. The woods is their friend. (A dream home ideal, not real yet). Thanks for being on board with it though. :-) Sugar Bear

Yann Rolland

Date: 3/16/2024 4:15:00 PM

just what i need, a moment of tranquility, words are here too for peace, i love this sweet home, a dream in nature, this could be real, have a sweet wek end poet

Bill Baker
Date: 3/16/2024 4:36:00 PM

Thank you, Yann. That was the feel I was going for. A close-to-nature life. Blessings my friend. Bill

Deb M

Date: 3/16/2024 3:46:00 PM

Seriously Bill?? How wonderful that would be….will it become reality? I hope so….sounds exciting and special! Make up the spare bed please!! I love this poem my texan buddy it flows beautifully….Debx

Bill Baker
Date: 3/16/2024 4:35:00 PM

You'd always be welcome, Deb. It could take a while to manifest though ($2.9 million) in the most secure and luxurious form. It's beautiful inside with the water falls and bathing pool. It would be like living inside of a hundred's year-old oak tree. Talk about being one with nature! Okay, time to cool my jets. Have a pleasant weekend, my dear friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Duke Beaufort

Date: 3/16/2024 2:33:00 PM

If that it your place, it is beautiful. If only a dream or wish, then you have a lovely model to emulate or improve upon. The shapes are reminiscent of the Sidney Opera House! Timeless!

Bill Baker
Date: 3/16/2024 3:24:00 PM

Thanks for the visit and comments, Duke. (Dream home, not a reality yet). We like the ideal of least intrusive to the natural surroundings and secure, safe, domicile underground. The more comforts, the more $'s. It can get very expensive to make it ultra secure. (Vault like). Have a pleasant evening, my friend. Bill

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 3/16/2024 1:52:00 PM

A fabulous poem, Bill. Innovation is in style. Just be certain that you install a door before the bear hibernation months.

Bill Baker
Date: 3/16/2024 3:19:00 PM

Vault door 20 feet into the entry way. No one enters without our permission. (Dream home, not a reality yet) Thanks for the comment, my friend. Have a pleasant evening! Bill