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Quill writing - Tales by Trees

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/29/2024 1:59:00 PM

A creative write with a great picture. I enjoyed reading it. I have missed you... Have a fun day writing away.....................

Bill Baker
Date: 4/29/2024 6:28:00 PM

Thanks for the visit and comments, Paula. I'm going to try and find time in May to get back to posting and commenting. Have a great week, my friend. Bill

Joe Maverick

Date: 4/24/2024 10:29:00 AM

Great, clear innovative, and strongly delivered Bill.! This is a joy to read..Thank you for creating This wonderful write.'

Bill Baker
Date: 4/24/2024 6:22:00 PM

A Little unorthodox, but a fun write, my friend. Thanks for reading and commenting on my poetry, Joe. I'll start posting again in May. I've been very busy landscaping and extending our backyard patio. Have a great week, my friend. Bill

Karen Croft

Date: 4/24/2024 8:26:00 AM

Yes this is very true! Have a great night

Bill Baker
Date: 4/24/2024 6:19:00 PM

Thanks for the visits and comments, Karen. Have a great week! Bill

Regina Elliott

Date: 4/19/2024 4:22:00 PM

Precisely right, good poetry friend. I think the Declaration of Independence document is a resounding example of this. And of course, writing in general. Have a blessed evening. ~

Bill Baker
Date: 4/20/2024 8:46:00 PM

I agree with your observation, Regina. The Declaration of Independence is a good example of this poem's meaning. Thanks for the visit and comments, my friend. Have a nice weekend! Hugs, Bill

Christina Bowring

Date: 4/19/2024 9:35:00 AM

Dear Bill, I absolutely love this my dear friend. It’s so creative and clever and the beautiful words just seem to float. Very impressed. Thank you for sharing. Have a blessed weekend. Hugs to you both.

Bill Baker
Date: 4/20/2024 8:44:00 PM

Thank you for the kind comments, Christina. I hope you have a pleasant weekend too. Hugs, Bill

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

Date: 4/18/2024 3:38:00 PM

Very different way to express something that touches our heart. Bravo!

Bill Baker
Date: 4/18/2024 8:23:00 PM

Thanks for the visit and comment, Maria. Have a joyful week, my friend. Bill

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/17/2024 1:26:00 AM

Very original way of writing a poem. Like Jacob's stairway, it leads to Heaven.

Bill Baker
Date: 4/17/2024 6:29:00 PM

Good reference, my friend. Hadn't thought of that. Thanks for the visit and comments, Victor. Have a pleasant week! Bill

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/16/2024 7:43:00 PM

I like your 'stairway to freedom's heaven, Bill. Nicely done!! :) Gershon

Bill Baker
Date: 4/17/2024 6:28:00 PM

It was fun. Glad you like it. Have a pleasant week, my friend. BB

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/16/2024 8:08:00 AM

good one. I see the thoughts taking flight. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Bill Baker
Date: 4/17/2024 6:26:00 PM

Thanks for the visit and comment, Sara. Have a nice day! Bill

Marugu Mo

Date: 4/16/2024 3:41:00 AM

Indeed they are though sometimes confined to an A4. Interesting form!

Bill Baker
Date: 4/16/2024 7:39:00 AM

Not a formal Monoku, but is 17 syllables and creative. :-) Thanks for the visit and comment, Marugu. Have a great week, my friend. Bill

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/15/2024 6:31:00 AM

How fun this one is…Light as a feather, Bill! Hugs ~ Kim

Bill Baker
Date: 4/15/2024 4:10:00 PM

Thanks for the uplifting comment, Kim, and for the hugs. Hugs, Bill

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/14/2024 7:15:00 PM

Very cool. The way you formed this. Clever.

Bill Baker
Date: 4/15/2024 8:00:00 AM

Thanks, it was fun to write, Andrea. Have a great week, my friend. Bill

David Fisher

Date: 4/14/2024 5:11:00 PM

This is wonderful, Bill. A pleasure to read the words in flight, and the message.

Bill Baker
Date: 4/15/2024 8:01:00 AM

Thanks for the visit and comment, David. Glad you enjoyed reading this one. :-) Have a great week, my friend. Bill

Tom Woody

Date: 4/14/2024 12:30:00 PM

Cool concrete style Billiam. Nice message too

Bill Baker
Date: 4/15/2024 8:02:00 AM

Thanks, Tom, the Brilliam was very creative, my friend. Have a great week! Bill

Yann Rolland

Date: 4/13/2024 5:10:00 PM

very inspiring poem, great poety, thanks poet

Bill Baker
Date: 4/13/2024 7:07:00 PM

Thanks for reading my poetry, Yann. Have a great day! Bill

Joseph May

Date: 4/13/2024 11:05:00 AM

Very creative write Bill, best wishes

Bill Baker
Date: 4/13/2024 7:06:00 PM

Thanks for the visit and comment, Joseph. Have a great day! Bill

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 4/12/2024 7:24:00 AM

I believe it to be true. No one can stop us from writing.

Bill Baker
Date: 4/12/2024 5:27:00 PM

:-) said like a true writer or poet, Hilda. May you write with your heart content, my friend. Bill

Robert Schatz

Date: 4/11/2024 10:54:00 PM

It really works Bill! The (physical) rising of the words perfectly suits the rise of the thoughts. Cheers.

Bill Baker
Date: 4/12/2024 5:34:00 PM

Just thought I'd do something a little creative and different with this on. Thanks for the comment, Robert. Have a great weekend, my friend. Bill

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 4/11/2024 5:28:00 PM

Dear Bill, your poem is a captivating exploration of the power of words to liberate the mind. I loved that each line flows seamlessly, echoing the boundless potential of our thoughts when given the freedom to soar. It's the transformative journey we embark on through the written word. Wonderful Write! - Blessings, Daniel

Bill Baker
Date: 4/12/2024 5:38:00 PM

Thanks for the visit and comments, Daniel. I haven't been very active this month but am still here. :-) Have a pleasant weekend, my friend. Bill

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/11/2024 1:08:00 PM

Soaring high, my friend, on thoughts of intellect. A creative, meaningful poem, Bill.

Bill Baker
Date: 4/12/2024 6:05:00 PM

Thanks for the encouraging words, my friend. Bill

Zyrool Gifford

Date: 4/11/2024 12:55:00 PM

Beautifully said, Bill. I like your style, brilliantly executed. Have a great day, my friend.

Bill Baker
Date: 4/12/2024 6:13:00 PM

Thanks, my new friend, for the visit and comments. I like to do things a little different from time to time. This was one of those times. :-) Have a great weekend! Bill

Stephan McBride

Date: 4/11/2024 10:19:00 AM

Love how you put this together, to bring a powerful message

Bill Baker
Date: 4/12/2024 6:16:00 PM

Thanks for the visit, Stephan, I've been a little inactive lately. I'm glad you dropped by when I had a new poem posted. Have a pleasant weekend, my friend. Bill

Lin Lane

Date: 4/11/2024 9:48:00 AM

Bill, you found the most ingenious way of delivering the message of your Monoku. I believe your thoughts mirror my own... some of our poetic words need a means of escape that we achieve by writing them as if they have wings to fly!! What did you and Sara have for breakfast today? You're both wickedly wonderful in writing form.

Lin Lane
Date: 4/12/2024 8:48:00 AM

Haha. It was an open question and you could take it rhetorically or literally.

Bill Baker
Date: 4/12/2024 8:31:00 AM

Thank you for the kind compliments, Lin. I agree with you, our thoughts to mirror one another's at times. As for breakfast: Bill, bowl of cereal, grapes and a banana ... Sara, bowl of fruit (pieces of apples, plums, peaches, and grapes), and a slice of toast. OH! a rhetorical question ... Oops :-) I hope you had a wonderful day, my friend. Hugs, Bill

Jay Narain

Date: 4/11/2024 9:46:00 AM

I get the feeling of a free flying kite. Nice one.

Bill Baker
Date: 4/12/2024 6:18:00 PM

That's a nice way to see it, Jay. Have a pleasant weekend, my friend. Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/11/2024 9:28:00 AM

tnhis is absolutely a brilliant Monoku!!! I've not seen one written in this manner before. Through your poem's physical structure, we see words ascending toward freedom taking their flight into the realms of creativity. You more than nailed this one. I'm just so dang impressed!

Bill Baker
Date: 4/12/2024 6:22:00 PM

Thank you for your enduring words of encouragement, my love. You are my inspiration to write poetry. Hugs, Bill