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Astounded ... Death caught his breath ... cast his net to the stars, thrown to drape green beryl shards - hand-over-hand he hauled, bracing for angels. Angular, faceted gems, melted and poured ... cities of emerald spires glinted in his glass like ice, black-eyed flowers dressed for a Tango - (none named Susan ... using). Spinning in the easy poison breeze ... whirling brisk and spitting thistle, adrift on a scintillating mist, clenched fist - still a dim mystery to his rested wrists. Red corundum turned liquid, thus imbibed ... to burn his phony bones - crimson in his eyes, scorched and clotted like tiny cabochon rubies - shattered by a false fealty, that winks ... That nips its luscious bow lips, coy, calculated ... lighting a mended, double-ended fuse, that ignites only itself - its spicy, sassy self - fire heats, desire competes ... complete ... Attraction. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Free Verse Fever - A - Cash Prize" Poetry Contest, Lu Loo, Judge & Sponsor. * I chose the word 'Astounded' for my theme, (melding 'Attraction' as well) *

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Date: 1/23/2020 10:02:00 AM
I can see why this one got top billing. Congrats on a fine win. Thanks as well for your kind visit.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/30/2020 11:08:00 PM
Thank you so much, Richard, you are always kind, my friend. Blessings! :o)
Date: 1/23/2020 7:07:00 AM
just beautiful and soothing as always dear Greg, your emotion stands alone...thank you for your participation and congratulations on your placement...x:-)-luloo
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/30/2020 11:08:00 PM
Many kind thanks for the placement and comments, Lu - I'm so pleased you liked it! :o) <3
Date: 1/23/2020 5:54:00 AM
bracing for angels, I love that line Gregory, your always a light in the dark when you write, Congratulations on your special win, Have a wonderful day. xo
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/30/2020 11:07:00 PM
You are very kind, Pixie, and it is so appreciated - thank you! :o) <3
Date: 1/22/2020 7:32:00 PM
Gregory congrats on your top win!;)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/30/2020 11:07:00 PM
Thanks so much, Brenda! :o) <3

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