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Fog Of Sunshine

Upon arriving in a cold dawn breeze Whilst hands might be full, demanding to lift Eagle eyed on such a shadow at ease Extends a welcome, still I became stiff. Aura’s on edge to this fragile posture Dismal charade coats his inner bearing As river of moonshine does not torture The eight, deep-seated ‘til rays are glaring. Gathered for indulgence at fresh midday The fragile has a mouth for his wise tongue Sharing trivia that carried me away And yet bluffs as a flat poker-faced young. The fog of sin from a bag of sunshine That is quite an open-and-shut draw line. Skin fires up along waters in motion A query comes in, hailed to modern dame The rant of the fragile spurs his notion Though excuse me, could not join your game. Flushed and away from taking the crisp pledge I sway to the tune of compelling tracks Heretofore, an act that I must not hedge Straight outside where the dazed fragile relaxed. From pedals and licks to favored genre The familiarity is round-the-clock Surplus existence is not a contra Evanescence of the soul comes to knock. The fog of sin from a bag of sunshine Drop out of sight; I think I will be fine. First shot - a lustrous rust from ripe wonder The seven, battled the craft of reason Second shot - a mind’s eye leads to blunder The two, tempted for the sake of season. Allured to the voice of inviting mischief A seal that is all but butterfly kiss Dries the dearest out beyond disbelief Enough of it calls the shots of mere bliss. Gasp of steamy air echoes out of range Lingering for the deep touch of desire Vague urge gives in to an enticing change Tender strokes spring from the poise we aspire. The fog of sin from a bag of sunshine The fragile climbed the capstone; likewise, mine. The first blush rises above horizon As the three sheets to the wind tiptoed well Being caught in a fly-by-night zion Upstairs is under one’s wing from the spell. Scruffy yet born with bewitching feature Voice endowed with suavity sweeps off feet Mesmeric eyes that can cause mild seizure Dear me now, could not stare or even greet. The four, smoothed the way back to how things charm Others remained; clueless of what took shape Swan song by the fragile got my cheek warm Treated this breathing space as sweet escape. The fog of sin from a bag of sunshine Still and all, an open-and-shut draw line.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/6/2014 11:16:00 PM
Welcome to the soup, Kabayan! I've only come across your poem today and I'm amazed at the flurry of images you've woven together. I'm excited to read more from you. :)
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Maria Rheza Mae Rubio
Date: 5/7/2014 4:59:00 AM
Hi Jake! Thank you for the warm welcome :) Thanks for the appreciation. Looking forward to the work of others also!! :) :)
Date: 5/5/2014 1:25:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Maria :) - I choose your first lovely written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Maria Rheza Mae Rubio
Date: 5/6/2014 4:36:00 AM
Thank you so much for the warm welcome, Anne-Lise! Yeah, I think I will feel homey here coz of the people :) I have yet to post another sonnet... I'm just quite busy at work as of the moment. Thanks again, looking forward to it!! :) :)
Date: 5/1/2014 11:06:00 PM
Nice Poem and Nice Name.hehe. Welcome to poetrysoup, keep on sharing your thoughts with your new friends in here .. -jhucel29
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Maria Rheza Mae Rubio
Date: 5/2/2014 9:14:00 AM
Hi Jhucel! Thank you so much for the warm welcome. I will :) :)
Date: 4/29/2014 4:32:00 PM
Maria, , your first poem was enjoyable. , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Maria Rheza Mae Rubio
Date: 5/1/2014 12:59:00 AM
Hi Linda! Thank you so much for the flattery and appreciation, and for the warm welcome :) Wow, that was a long time ago! Hope I can keep up like that, as well haha. Yeah, I already checked your contest. Thanks for the invite! Can I submit this one? I'll submit my new work also. I'm still new to this kind of community. Don't worry, I'll keep in touch! Thanks again and take care!! :) :)
Date: 4/29/2014 2:48:00 PM
Hi Maria, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Maria Rheza Mae Rubio
Date: 5/1/2014 12:52:00 AM
Hi SKAT! Thank you so much for the warm welcome :) I'll write more sonnets because of the motivation I get from here. I hope I can be active for a long time! Looking forward to meet all the nice poets here. I'm really into writing poems since I was a kid, but I treat writing as my outlet, not profession :) Thanks for stopping by, my new friend SKAT!! :) :)
Date: 4/29/2014 2:42:00 PM
Wow!!! this is so deep and well written poem!!! .. ;O)) WELCOME to POETRYSOUP,Rheza MAe!!! your poem is so delight... I enjoyed reading each lines... I'm sure everybody here in SOup would love to read it. I hope you enjoy the love of the people from different countries... they are so kind and very supportive.. and they are a lot!!!! We are ONE BIG Family here... Keep penning and enjoy sharing your talent and skill in writing!!! KEEP YOUR PEN HIGH!!! oxoxox ~~~ Aiyah ^__^
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Date: 5/1/2014 12:46:00 AM
Hi Aiyah! Thank you so much for these kind words :) I'd never expected such appreciation! I'm overwhelmed, really. Thanks for the warm welcome!! Yeah, I think I'm gonna enjoy it here haha. Don't worry, I'm looking forward to each and everyone's work, as well. For sure, reading the work of others will add to my inspiration! Thanks for the support!! :) :)