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Flying South

"In all things of nature there is something of the marvellous" - Aristotle Birds Flying Precisely In Formation, Wing tip to wing tip, An avian army Seeking a warmer climate, As they do at this time each year, They are instinctively heading for A place more congenial than this one. Howmanysyllables used, but faulty on some lines. The syllable counter (above) gives 9 for the last line, I get 10. 5/21/20 "Nature Etheree" Dear Heart

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Date: 5/28/2020 10:40:00 AM
Beth, wonderfully penned and congratulations on your win in my contest _Constance
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Beth Evans
Date: 5/29/2020 4:31:00 AM
Thanks very much, Constance, I'm really grateful.
Date: 5/25/2020 1:49:00 PM
"Am avian army seeking a warmer climate" brings back memorable images of migratory birds I used to watch in my city. Beautifully penned. Congratulations on your win Beth! :)
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Beth Evans
Date: 5/25/2020 8:10:00 PM
Thanks very much, Aditi, an unforgettable sight, i imagine.
Date: 5/24/2020 8:13:00 PM
Well done, Beth. I'm always in awe of the formations used by migrating birds. They are like artwork on a canvas of sky. Congratulations ~ John
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Beth Evans
Date: 5/25/2020 8:10:00 PM
Thanks very much, John, it is certainly a marvellous sight.
Date: 5/24/2020 4:46:00 PM
Nicely done, Beth , congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Beth Evans
Date: 5/24/2020 7:39:00 PM
Thanks very much, Eve, always good to place.
Date: 5/21/2020 2:22:00 PM
Sunshine and food...Nicely done, good imagery too...
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Beth Evans
Date: 5/21/2020 7:35:00 PM
Thanks very much, Arturo.
Date: 5/21/2020 1:43:00 PM
Great imagery of your 'avian army' looking for a more congenial place to spend the season - best wishes for the contest!
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Beth Evans
Date: 5/21/2020 7:34:00 PM
Thanks very much, Michelle - same back if you've entered.