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Faraway love

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For the bite size contest. Poem inspired by Faraway Love by Agnes Martin

demarcation of love, like and longing tears slivers from its crucial composition placing bars on a blue sky

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Lin Lane

Date: 3/12/2025 11:43:00 AM

I saw the picture first and wondered how it was glitched. It certainly fits the theme of your lines, Dilly.

Lin Lane
Date: 3/12/2025 2:01:00 PM

It garnered our attention ;-)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/12/2025 12:03:00 PM

I sometimes wonder how a painting like this can be compelling, but it still is in a mysterious way..thanks for the vote of confidence Lin, I'll see how I fare :)