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Eyes that smiled

The smiling eyes and manner of life’s joy,
enough to melt the hearts of foreign girls.
So soon, and with a surprise to the boy,
enchanted new friends, alluring love‘s pearls.
Not one, not two, but three, in place of two,
left far behind in time, and in distance.
Novel joy in virgin land, embraced to
beleive in love’s forthcoming existence.
The eyes that smiled, enticing tenderly,
innocent maidens of youth to snuggle,
against the cheerful boy who so gently,
would embrace, hold tight in a warm cuddle.
Sweet was the virtue of being smitten,
innocence of the three girls from Britain.

T.J Grén

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Date: 5/22/2016 11:43:00 PM
Made me smile, and also brought me memories of a ferry ride from Finland to Sweden! :)
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Teppo Gren
Date: 5/23/2016 12:29:00 AM
Thank you very much, Arthur. When did you visit Finland? The ferry rides are great. T.J
Date: 4/12/2016 5:18:00 PM
just now reading about the three girls liking you. Gotta tell you, I don't see replies to my comments. I had that feature turned off. Now if I could just find a new one of yours I have not read yet.
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Date: 4/12/2016 11:23:00 PM
Always a pleasure to see you visit and comment my poems, Andrea. Yeah, I know the problem. It's very difficult to know (and remember) which poems I've already read. T.J
Date: 3/29/2016 3:30:00 PM
oh my, now THAT is what I call palying the field!! It was nice to go back into your oldies and find one like this.
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Teppo Gren
Date: 3/29/2016 11:11:00 PM
Yes, playing the field...LoL. I was 12 years old at the time. My family migrated to Australia (back in 1968) and we lived in a migrant hostel where after 2 days I learned that 3 British girls liked me. It was sweet. T.J
Date: 1/8/2016 7:44:00 PM
Well my friend T.J. another Sonnet that sings in its cocoon of Love. Your words of gentleness sing through this Sonnet. My Friend T.J. another seven and a fave for another exceptional work....Vladislav.
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Date: 1/9/2016 6:34:00 AM
I am very pleased to hear your kind comments, Vladislav. Thank you very much for the 7 and fav. T.J