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Eyes-Too-Much

A pair of mystical bronzed eyes, Glimpsed into my charmed heart. The rains poured down in relentlessness; Coupled with the winter frost, it ran a chill through my veins. A mellow candle flame, Burned in the distance. In resemblance to the diffused blaze, Ignited within my sapphire heart. The darkness of the night grew; the silver moon hid herself behind the nimbus. I glanced back at those eyes. A strange awe drenched me. There was weakness in those eyes, and I found my strength.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/18/2014 6:44:00 PM
Nice ones on bronzed eyes and a sapphire heart! congrats.
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Date: 11/29/2013 11:47:00 AM
And you remain strong because you found yourself! Thanks for writing this!
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Date: 11/17/2013 11:33:00 PM
Awesome poem. You are a Poetess.
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