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My Eternal Love

When dew dripping from a flower’s petals, and softly on your fingertip settles. Like soft caresses of a lover’s touch, it is eternal Love you want so much. Then there’s the part of me that lets Love through, visualizing the Light that shines in you. My heart senses your heart’s need to take care, together life’s challenges we will bear. Our Love will be perfect, forever true, my eternal self loves eternal you. We’ll live life to the fullest, come what may, showing our Love to others day after day. To eternal Love, how short is the course, When powered by Love the eternal Source.

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Date: 12/21/2023 2:10:00 PM
Very beauteous verse, Bill. Lovely eternal sentiments penned with such grace. ~
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Date: 12/21/2023 10:20:00 PM
Only the beautiful people can relate to the beauty in others and other things, as you do, my friend. Have a pleasant last 10 days of 2023 and a whole year of blessings in 2024. Bill & Sara Baker
Date: 12/21/2023 12:32:00 PM
Howdy pardner.. This beautiful poem delicately captures the essence of eternal love with vivid imagery and a heartfelt expression of connection.. Your sonnet is a lyrical masterpiece that gracefully weaves together the beauty of nature and the enduring quality of love. The opening lines, describing dew on a flower's petals, create an immediate and evocative image, setting the tone for a romantic and timeless exploration of love...
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Date: 12/21/2023 10:18:00 PM
It represents the tender side of me and the true way I see life and Love. I want to write more poetry about the beauty I see all around me. I just have to slow down, (and as they say), smell the roses. Thanks for your meaningful comments, my friend. They mean a lot to both Sara and me. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill & Sara Baker
Date: 12/21/2023 12:27:00 PM
The divine affection bestowed upon us by the Almighty empowers us to embrace love in its utmost capacity within the confines of our mortal existence. Devoid of love, we would meander aimlessly through the vast ocean of life, akin to a ship bereft of a guiding rudder. How truly marvelous it is to behold the profound affection shared between you and Sara. May the joyous occasion of Christmas and the dawning of a New Year be adorned with countless blessings of unparalleled splendor upon both of you.
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Date: 12/21/2023 10:15:00 PM
We just feel so blessed each new year we get and sharing our lives and thoughts through our poetry with friends like you, Lasaad, means the world to both of us. I had no ideal the blessings I'd receive when I started posted here on Poetry Soup two years ago. Enjoy these last ten days of 2023 and the whole of 2024! Bill & Sara Baker
Date: 12/21/2023 11:20:00 AM
Nice ode to eternal love,
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Date: 12/21/2023 10:11:00 PM
Thank you, Jay. I enjoyed writing this one. Have a pleasant weekend, my friend. Bill
Date: 12/21/2023 9:54:00 AM
So wonderfully said on so many levels, Bill. Not only is this a romantic sonnet but it is a love letter to God - our heavenly Valentine! Thank you for sharing this wonderful sonnet, "powered by Love the eternal Source." Merry Christmas to you and your family. May it be filled with special blessings and joy for you !
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Date: 12/21/2023 10:10:00 PM
Thank you, my friend. It's always special to remember the child in the manger. Smiles ~ Blessings for you and those you Love. Bill & Sara Baker
Date: 12/21/2023 5:32:00 AM
WOW! Awesome ode to love, Bill.
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Date: 12/21/2023 10:07:00 PM
Thank you for the nice comment, Vijay. Enjoy your weekend, my dear friend. Bill
Date: 12/21/2023 2:19:00 AM
Yes, God's love gives us the ability to love to the fullest extent of our human ability. Thanks for sharing this love sonnet with us. Your visits to my page are uplifting. Sara K
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Date: 12/21/2023 10:07:00 PM
As are your visit to mine, Sara. I enjoy reading your poetry and your comments on mine, my friend. Have a pleasant weekend, my Georgia peach. :-) Bill
Date: 12/20/2023 9:09:00 PM
Beautiful
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Date: 12/20/2023 10:11:00 PM
A first-time visitor to my poetry, I believe. Thank you for reading and commenting on my poetry, Harsha. I'll visit your poetry soon. Have a great week! Bill
Date: 12/20/2023 8:49:00 PM
My, my! So, so, beautiful! What a serenade :)
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Date: 12/20/2023 10:09:00 PM
Thank you, Unseeking Seeker. We try to keep the Love flowing through us. You may not celebrate the traditional Christmas we do, but we want to wish you a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year! Blessings our friend, Bill & Sara Baker
Date: 12/20/2023 8:37:00 PM
A beautiful romantic verse Bill. Without love we'd be floating through life like a rudderless ship. Tom
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Date: 12/20/2023 10:07:00 PM
It's nice to have someone to share my life with that Loves me, Tom. Have a great week, my friend. Bill
Date: 12/20/2023 8:12:00 PM
Unconditional love will always see you through. So wonderful knowing that you and Sara have this kind of love for each other. This is so beautiful and romantic. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you both. Many wonderful blessings. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 12/20/2023 10:06:00 PM
Thank you, Brandy, for the comments on my poetry and for the friendship we share. Sara and I wish you a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year! Hugs from the two of us, Bill & Sara Baker
Date: 12/20/2023 7:15:00 PM
Beautiful poem, what a blessing you and Sara have to have the Love of God flowing throughout your presence unto each other and all that comes to know you, : ). Thanks for both of you being a light in darkness and sharing the love of God
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Date: 12/20/2023 10:04:00 PM
I told Sara right off, went I say I Love you it is the same thing as saying I God you, because God is all that is Love. Having been raised by parents that were not church goers, I was privileged to help her to understand the Holy Spirit working in her heart, and she accept Christ as her Savior and was baptized. God has blessed our union and is our rock. Thanks for commenting and reading Sara and my poetry, our friend. Bill
Date: 12/20/2023 6:53:00 PM
awww...such a beautiful picture and astounding words! When we met, we were both looking for eternal love. We sensed it, but weren't quite sure what to do. We do see and love each other's true hearts and souls...a grand story to behold! Yes, we'll live life to the fullest, that is our course...forever yours, me PS blushing.. :-)
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Date: 12/20/2023 9:30:00 PM
Thanks for the memories, my soulmate. I Love you! Bill
Date: 12/20/2023 6:49:00 PM
Awwn this is such a magical sonnet about eternal love and its enchanting mystique.. So much you've conveyed within these lines that no matter what may come, true love will always stay above any difficult and no one can shake its foundations.. Very true, indeed! In fact, the bond gets stronger with every hurdle that comes in the way.. Such a profound and deep write this is, dear Bill.. Absolutely a pleasure reading this, a FAV for me :) keep writing and inspiring!
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Date: 12/20/2023 9:59:00 PM
Thanks for the thoughtful comments, Hiya, you really seem to understand a great deal about life for your years taking part in it. You seem like an amazing young woman to me. Smiles ~ Blessings ... and thanks for the FAV! :-) Hugs, Bill

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