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The energy of the mind is the essence of life. ~Aristotle | Wonder ...

The essence of our existence is eternal So dead or alive, we always survive We continually come into a form Or out of a form either physical or spiritual We live continually existing for eternity Either in a physical form or spiritual form Our eternal form is spiritual Our host in the physical world can die or be destroyed Spirit from a state of omnipresence becomes Thought from a place of all possibilities Transforming through intention And is manifested as physical life Eternal energy is present in each state Spirit, thought, intention and manifestation When the eternal energy leaves the physical state It returns to its natural state of Spirit and omnipresence This is the cycle of eternal energy Which is the essence of life, or spirit And the source of all that is manifest And recycled throughout eternity

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Date: 1/27/2024 12:13:00 PM
Your poem opens with a profound assertion about the timeless nature of being. It suggests that regardless of whether we are alive or deceased, our essence endures beyond physical boundaries. This concept of continuity underscores the idea that life transcends individual forms and moments in time.. It offers a philosophical reflection on the interconnectedness of all things and the enduring nature of life..
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Date: 1/27/2024 3:43:00 PM
Well stated, Silent One. Those are the kind of thoughts that led to this poem. You're a wonderful writer beyond poetry, my friend. Thanks for the mindful comments. Have a pleasant weekend. Bill
Date: 1/27/2024 5:54:00 AM
This feels so deep and instructive, my friend. Our energy lives for long in some form--usually the good deeds that touched lives. Profound write!
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Date: 1/27/2024 3:41:00 PM
I agree, Vijay, the good deed that met another's need. Thanks for commenting! Have a great weekend! Bill
Date: 1/26/2024 8:33:00 PM
Verse contains so many deep philosophical thoughts. Thanks for this promise of spirituality that each needs.
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Date: 1/27/2024 3:39:00 PM
You're welcome, my friend. Thanks for commenting! Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Date: 1/26/2024 5:57:00 PM
Recycled throughout eternity. What a lovely concept, my friend. I hope you have a blessed weekend, Bill.
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Date: 1/26/2024 8:00:00 PM
Thanks, Jerry, you too, my friend. Bill
Date: 1/26/2024 4:17:00 PM
What a deep and profound poem, Bill. You've explained so well what I believe in my heart of hearts. We are spirit first and, in that sense are omnipresent and timeless. Your words were smooth and your message clearly stated. I love the notion of recycling throughout eternity.
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Bill Baker
Date: 1/26/2024 5:30:00 PM
You're my treasure, Sara. Thanks for the encouraging comments. Have a peaceful evening. Hugs, Bill

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