Get Your Premium Membership

Entreaty to Your Absence

I am writing to tell you, Dear Father
how much I miss you, in your undue absence
Mother will not reveal the reason
for your leaving - she wears a sad expression
and weaves a dismal tapestry-
a navy waterscape lit by a pale glow
from a ghostly planet
 
Being barely fifteen I base my understanding
on limited experience, yet know
her heart grows now more desolate
with each stitch of gloomy emptiness
 
In dawn's illumination yesterday
I watched her gather flowers
Pale, fragile morning glory
She never knew I saw her shed, those
sweet tears that mingled with the dew.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




Post Comments
Please Login to post a comment
Date: 3/12/2019 9:46:00 PM
Heartfelt, and tells us of your mother's sacrifice, and carefulness to not burden her children with her burden. Lovely!
Login to Reply
Date: 3/12/2019 4:15:00 PM
Very touching! The sadness, she felt, you well expressed, I can see her. Love, Panagiota
Login to Reply
Date: 3/12/2019 7:35:00 AM
This poem evokes saddened emotions...many can relate to..and shed tears. A powerful write, SuZ.
Login to Reply
Date: 3/11/2019 10:38:00 PM
G'day Suzanne … nicely written on a topic that heartbroken folk live each day in silence with - thank you Suzanne - Lindsay
Login to Reply
Date: 3/11/2019 4:51:00 PM
Such a sad poem, yet so true for so many..love the sincerity in your words Suzanne...
Login to Reply
Delaney Avatar
Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/11/2019 5:07:00 PM
Thanks Harry: Sometimes we need a sad poem. Thanks for stopping by...it really cheered me. SuZ