Ek Kali Punna Komajali

Ek Kali Punna Komajali Ek kali umalt hoti, Aaichya garbhat khelat hoti, Tich hot swapan shoth, Jag pahav aapan moth. Aaich hot jiv aaplya balavar, Babanch hi hot swapan aaplya babavar, Kunas thauk najar kunachi lagli? Ya aanadachya shanala !!!! Jevha kalale aaji-aajobanna, Mulacha varasa nahi gharanya, Tisakar ticha hou lagala Kay dosha ticha ? Ti mulagi asalyacha? Aani keli tichihi hatya janmnya aadhich… Aani punna ek kali phulanya aadhich komajali……. Aani punna ek kali phulanya aadhich komajali……. Akshata Pimple Gundawali ( Boisar )

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2016 4:23:00 PM

Akshata Pimple, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

SKAT A

Date: 12/27/2015 3:53:00 PM

HOPE TO SEE YOU BACK 2016

SKAT A

Date: 12/26/2013 12:48:00 AM

oh my ..... :) :) Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT"

Syam Madappattu

Date: 12/24/2013 9:44:00 AM

Hey, Akshat really I couldn't make out any thing. But I appreciate your attempt.All the best..

Sunshine Smile

Date: 12/21/2013 7:23:00 AM

- Welcome to P-Soup, Akshata ! - Nice to read your first poem here.:)) - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/21/2013 7:15:00 AM

ok... Akshata, entertaining. .. , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@