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Crush from a Distance

On his awareness, her flaunted features stand a peg forcing out zeal and energy from his third leg praying for a wishful share of her behind like a chair and yet unending are his hopes, prayers and beg.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/22/2016 2:59:00 AM
The greatest pains in life are unending hopes & prayers, especially if focused on a wishful share of the affections of the object of a crush. Neat piece, Funom!
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/27/2016 7:12:00 AM
Thank you so much Agona Apell
Date: 2/20/2016 10:40:00 AM
Wow love this limerick Funom.
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/27/2016 7:11:00 AM
Thank you so much Harry
Date: 2/19/2016 5:08:00 PM
Interesting work..Not so sure that it isn't borderline off limits..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/27/2016 7:11:00 AM
Thank you so much Sara
Date: 2/18/2016 4:37:00 PM
Don't know what to say, other than well done. Thanks for visiting Funom, appreciated.
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/19/2016 7:20:00 AM
Thank you so much Pete
Date: 2/18/2016 4:06:00 PM
such charm you bring, funom... crushes sweeten life!..huggs
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/19/2016 7:20:00 AM
Thank you so much nette
Date: 2/18/2016 12:01:00 PM
Very eloquent choice of words, my friend. I love it. Peace:) I can't really say what I'm thinking, decorum, you know.
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/19/2016 7:21:00 AM
Thank you so much Daniel
Date: 2/18/2016 9:21:00 AM
deep limerick, Funom... ha, his third leg... Enjoyed your sense of humor. Love LINDA
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/18/2016 9:47:00 AM
hahahahahahahaha!! I am so happy you got it. Thanks for the wonderful comment Linda
Date: 2/18/2016 8:51:00 AM
Rather cryptic, well phrased write, Funom!
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/18/2016 9:47:00 AM
Thank you so much Whatley