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Country Walk in Springtime

Humming, while walking along a country roadside smelling new mown hay

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 1/23/2009 4:47:00 PM
OOHHHH, I absolutely adore this one, Carrie- All the charm and wonder, of a time where I grew up, in Arkansas- Truly a keeper!!!! Poet Butterfly
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Date: 1/22/2009 7:35:00 AM
mmmm, LOVe that smell. Living in VT, I smell that alot...that and fresh horse and cow poo - yummy! lol Love, me
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Date: 1/22/2009 5:06:00 AM
How light and carefree. Never smelled new mown hay. Grass yes of course, but not hay. Love the country. Sure feel like I have missed out. Wonderful haiku. Love, Shar
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Date: 1/22/2009 3:09:00 AM
I Love that smell! Thank you for the lovely vivid piacture, Carrie. Love, Lainie PS, And thank you for your kind comments, they mean so much to me.
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Date: 1/22/2009 2:10:00 AM
The smell of fresh cut hay is a great smell. Your haiku brings back great memories to me...Raul
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Date: 1/21/2009 11:37:00 PM
Lovely images,sights and sounds and aromas Carrie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 1/21/2009 7:37:00 PM
Fresh sweet hay, sunshining, birds twittering, yep I'm there. Beautiful images you have penned! Love, Robin
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Date: 1/21/2009 6:45:00 PM
thanks for writing this it gives me such warm feelings in this cold weather-good write-rhonda hero
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Date: 1/21/2009 6:27:00 PM
What is going through the lass' mind through this stroll? Love the beauty of this write all feels so peaceful and bright. Well done.
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Date: 1/21/2009 6:12:00 PM
I can't wait for spring, the flowers, the fresh rain...loved this write, always, Christy
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Date: 1/21/2009 6:04:00 PM
Oh how I love the smells of spring, every sense comes alive. Ya gave me a smile Carrie. Laurie
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