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Considered Beauty

We tell ourselves, of rituals and rights, man made excite, creating rotten cores, righteous in wander, studied still the corpse, with a thirst as mine, considered beauty, would never sate, my appetite.

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Date: 1/18/2024 11:38:00 AM
Kate, your poem delves into the complexities of human perception and the pursuit of beauty. The use of vivid language and contrasting images creates a thought-provoking atmosphere. The lines "considered beauty, would never sate, my soul" carry a profound depth, challenging conventional notions. A captivating exploration of the elusive nature of true beauty. - Blessings, Daniel
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Kate Davies
Date: 1/19/2024 6:28:00 AM
Oh wow thank you so much for the lovely feedback, really means a lot to me, glad you enjoyed it :)

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