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Come To My Bed

Patronizing her inner streets with cool lust-hawking she’s compromising flaunted standards with kiss-talking gentle but impolite a sweetening soft fight started like a hard script ending in sweet love making.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 7/16/2017 10:17:00 PM
I loved this Funom. So true! : )
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/19/2017 11:31:00 AM
Thank you so much Connie
Date: 7/16/2017 7:59:00 AM
Flaunting the trade heavily to end in a sweet outcome. Good limerick Funom...Maria
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/19/2017 11:31:00 AM
Thank you so much Maria.. You have been of great encouragement to me these few days
Date: 7/13/2017 9:56:00 PM
Such ending :) great limerick, Funom
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/19/2017 11:30:00 AM
Thank you so much Akkina
Date: 7/13/2017 12:09:00 PM
So very well done Funom, profound in that it's business first...
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/19/2017 11:30:00 AM
Thank you so much CHarlie
Date: 7/13/2017 2:27:00 AM
Wow, you've hit that proverbial, "nail-on-the-head".
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/19/2017 11:30:00 AM
Thank you so much Kiser
Date: 7/12/2017 3:36:00 PM
The secrets of the trade are put in good use! Profound Limerick my friend, Furom!
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/19/2017 11:30:00 AM
Thank you so much Demetrios
Date: 7/12/2017 3:02:00 PM
ahhhh, it had a very sweet ending!!
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/19/2017 11:30:00 AM
Yeah Andrea... So sweeeeet. lol! Thank you so much
Date: 7/12/2017 12:32:00 PM
You capably describe this 'lady' as she uses all her experience to get what she wants...mainly payment (sweet lolly) in return for favours rendered. // paul
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/19/2017 11:29:00 AM
Thank you so much Paul Callus...
Date: 7/12/2017 9:59:00 AM
Good Limerick of viewing a street walker plying her trade.
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/12/2017 10:51:00 AM
Thank you so much Alfred..

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