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Lifeless tree deep summer swell mind is weapon sky is hell branch is thorn silence key gateless godless atrophy Summer fire winter locks ice and flame in equinox bloom and buzz fruit alight yet lifeless tree in darkness blight Hint of blood in gnarled bough spits of life somewhere somehow chain of fire knitted sun whip and thrash in twilight spun ‘til quiver flick sweet root and ghost the twisted spine consume the host a lowly bud through brackish skin immaculate in life begin A single leaf from sacred breath flits upon this tree of death little flame holy hues on burning sea our god imbues So, when darkest dreams In wrath arise Stroking red The silent skies I hold within However brief against my heart a little leaf

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Date: 8/6/2024 2:03:00 AM
Loved Reading..! Very Well Written..
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 8/17/2024 8:39:00 PM
I appreciate the comment, regards
Date: 8/1/2024 8:23:00 AM
Hi Mat. You weave a complex exploration of the human condition expressing disenchantment and juxtaposing it with hope. Well written
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 8/17/2024 8:38:00 PM
Thank you for the comment, kindest regards
Date: 6/29/2024 10:02:00 AM
Precious words in that last stanza. Sorry I'm late to the fest
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 6/30/2024 9:28:00 PM
thanks tom, take care and have a good night
Date: 6/27/2024 8:58:00 PM
Mat I think your poem is enchanting hugs Shadow
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 6/27/2024 9:19:00 PM
thank you for the kind comment, shadow, and congratulations also on your potd
Date: 6/27/2024 1:52:00 PM
How lovely! Leaves have a tender spot for those who feel they don’t count or feel unseen. Great imagery and all. Congrats, Mat, on POTW!
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 6/27/2024 3:03:00 PM
much appreciated for the comment and the visit - have a good day
Date: 6/26/2024 2:30:00 AM
Poem of the week, well done Mat, great flow and readability, nicely expressed!
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 6/26/2024 8:23:00 AM
I appreciate hearing from you, Clive
Date: 6/24/2024 4:58:00 PM
These are beautiful chains of thought of seasons, times and hopes. Congratulations on POTW.
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 6/24/2024 8:21:00 PM
thank you for the comment - have a good evening
Date: 6/24/2024 6:23:00 AM
What fantastic poetry! Congrats on POTW!
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 6/24/2024 7:48:00 AM
kindest wishes to you, kim - thank you for the comment
Date: 6/24/2024 1:59:00 AM
Wow, what a sublime and uplifting message of hope, so artistically weaved in this superbly crafted poem! Warmest congratulations on POTW, Mat
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 6/24/2024 7:48:00 AM
thank you for the kind words, i look forward to reading your work as well
Date: 6/24/2024 12:54:00 AM
This is amazing! Love that you were potw
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 6/24/2024 7:46:00 AM
thank you, karen - hope you have a good day
Date: 6/23/2024 6:51:00 PM
Well-deserved POTW, Mat. Profound thoughts and rich imagery. :) Gershon
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 6/24/2024 7:46:00 AM
i appreciate the comment, gershon
Date: 6/23/2024 5:10:00 PM
A lifeless tree holds a single leaf. It sounds like both are going through so many different stages in life. This is deep and emotional, all at the same time. Congratulations Mat, on Poem of the Week. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 6/23/2024 6:32:00 PM
My sincerest thank you
Date: 6/23/2024 9:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTW! Nice rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing.
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 6/23/2024 2:28:00 PM
My gratitude, Benjamin
Date: 6/23/2024 9:24:00 AM
The format you used here really stands out for me!!! In such brevity, you captured emotions, imagery and sensory, so well. I enjoyed your metaphor of the seasons transpiring the emotions of life as they transition through the emotional journey. You concluding on the the Spings bloom, “renewal and hope” was clever and inspiring. A very thoughtful and introspective read. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Well done and congratulations on POTW!!!
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 6/23/2024 2:28:00 PM
Thank you for the detailed reply, Edward, truly appreciated
Date: 6/23/2024 8:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTW win. I enjoyed reading this one. Great Ending....  Have a blessed day writing away...................
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 6/23/2024 2:27:00 PM
Appreciate the reply, Paula
Date: 6/23/2024 8:05:00 AM
Mat, congratulations on POTW.
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 6/23/2024 2:27:00 PM
Thank you for the support, Tania
Date: 6/23/2024 6:06:00 AM
Congratulations on POTW. Lovely piece indeed.
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 6/23/2024 2:26:00 PM
Thank you, Tonye, I appreciate this
Date: 6/23/2024 4:25:00 AM
Mat, I love this piece, it reaches into my very soul, congratulations on receiving the honor of POEM OF THE WEEK. I had this honor last week with my poem Earth, Constance
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 6/23/2024 2:25:00 PM
I appreciate your time, Constance. I will definitely go to poem, thank you
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Edward Wraith
Date: 6/23/2024 9:27:00 AM
Congratulations to you as well Constance!!!
Date: 6/23/2024 4:13:00 AM
Excellent Rhyme piece, Mat. Well deserved award, many congratulations on the POTW. Have a great day!
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 6/23/2024 2:24:00 PM
I appreciate this, Maria
Date: 6/23/2024 3:58:00 AM
Hey Mat, Congrats on this powerful and raw emotional POTW. I loved your contrasts between life and death, fire and ice which created such a haunting landscape. I think you have captured nature's cycles and inner struggles quite artistically. Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 6/23/2024 2:23:00 PM
Thank you Daniel and Edward for the kind responses, with gratitude
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Edward Wraith
Date: 6/23/2024 9:27:00 AM
Very well stated Daniel. I couldn’t agree more
Date: 6/23/2024 2:16:00 AM
A wonderful write Mat, congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the week… Beryl
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 6/23/2024 2:22:00 PM
Thank you, Beryl, take care
Date: 6/20/2024 10:27:00 AM
Definitely a favorite, well written and very descriptive! I enjoyed the read! ~Caryl
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 6/20/2024 12:18:00 PM
my gratitude
Date: 6/19/2024 12:27:00 PM
Gosh, this is a fav for me, dark is beautiful with you writing- so worthy of many reads
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 6/19/2024 12:28:00 PM
thank you paige, i appreciate this
Date: 6/18/2024 11:46:00 PM
I love this! It wrapped around my morning thoughts so well (as I try to narrate my demise over the top of a perfectly fine day needlessly). I particularly like "‘til quiver flick/ sweet root and ghost/ the twisted spine/ consume the host"
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 6/19/2024 12:28:00 PM
thank you for taking the time and the kind thoughts
Date: 6/18/2024 8:56:00 PM
Excellent, thought provoking poem with a perfect ending. Well done :)
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 6/18/2024 9:23:00 PM
my regards

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