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Bukowski and Kandel

I, a degreed empty-nester housewife, for years battened down the hatches for family's sake. Submerged in a podcast of Bukowski or Kandel I lifted the veil that separated our kindred souls. The smell, taste, and touch of their poetry delighted me, and I longed to know their Truths more intimately. Even with their bad breath and bare toes, They were what some in society hated, and I loved. So raw and uninhibited, they expressed true freedom, something I was yearning for especially having such strong convictions with outlook and attitude, rather than play victim to the times. Free-spirited, fresh, exhilarating passion submerged, I sprang forward, Continuing to listening to their poems and prose, dreaming to be more like them and less like me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 9/22/2021 4:18:00 AM
if it's a first-hand experience, is it ok to "dream more like them and less like me"?
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Kelly Besaw Gallo
Date: 9/26/2021 3:02:00 AM
I understand how you feel. It is a sad a poem but hopefully also liberating that we have poets that inspire us. Always feel free to comment. Be well my friend.
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Ultimate Spectator
Date: 9/25/2021 11:41:00 AM
sorry Kelly its just me tbh , i was feeling if I should be happy that I read a good piece but maybe I tried to read between the lines and that made me sad, anyways thats just how my current state is -pretty confused, so don't be concerned you wrote it nicely and i'm a spectator anyways. Best Wishes
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Kelly Besaw Gallo
Date: 9/24/2021 10:51:00 PM
Thank you for the comment; however, Not sure what you mean by that? Can you elaborate?

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