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Breathless

Ensembles of little wonder, rattle the mind amiss, percussing each muse asunder, more a kick drum than a kiss. Inherent absurdities, on which I plaster a smile, mortified in memories, regressing all the while. Through breathless interlude, studied demeanours lie, I pray for beats of solitude… to distract this rhythmless eye.

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Date: 12/23/2023 6:06:00 PM
Kate your poem is a beautiful and thought-provoking piece that captures the essence of life’s absurdities and the search for inner peace. The vivid imagery and rhythmic flow of the poem are truly captivating. Loved it! - Blessings, Daniel
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Kate Davies
Date: 12/23/2023 11:07:00 PM
Thanks you Daniel for the lovely words, it's really appreciated, glad you enjoyed the read :)

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