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Break the Mirror

Sometimes in our lives We are compelled to say 'I know you' A man playing a piano In a train station Inspired me to listen and write a poem The next day I met him It transpires he's an artist With installations all over the region Not that he told me this I looked it up later He was an at ease, happy in his skin guy Who introduced me from my corner As if I was part of the days plan I'd just remained in the art space To finish a project A nobody Making nothing much But as I told him How I was inspired by the music He read my poem And we both stood still I wondered how connections work It seems I have lived around his art Maybe it's his resonance I know well Year on year sending a frequency Out into the streets I walked I know not why it worked the other way Why he knew me I'm just a flickering light With brief moments of existence Where I am seen It was fun to be seen Or connect I walk away Unclear if I could always be more Or if I've just had a nice day Perhaps I don't feel myself Because I'm not quite myself yet There's no need for greatness Just for expression And connection To walk paths and stand still And be bathed in light The reason for his presence In the art room Was to discuss space and art How the boundaries are blurred With connections unknown Or incomprehensible That's a lot to think about Break The Mirror Poetry Contest 3rd March 2023 Sponsored by: Unseeking Seeker

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Date: 3/13/2023 1:17:00 PM
What an amazing experience DD! We never know when life will crack open an amazing experience. You have articulated your experience with such eloquence. I, too, have had such amazing moments of connection with a total stranger! Congratulations on your win. Truly the spirit of the serendipity is strong in you! Blessings.
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Date: 3/13/2023 2:24:00 PM
Thanks Sam, it was a great day that I felt I floated through on top of the world! Funny thing was I never watch television really and only saw the show briefly because I called in at someone's house.
Date: 3/13/2023 6:28:00 AM
Extremely powerful imagery around something so ineffable. The self-reflection you undertake here is commendable and so clearly done in earnest. It is an uncomfortably honest poem, to its credit. I hope it is ok to say that I am disappointed you didn't win first place. I entered the contest myself, so truly not a criticism to anyone else. Your piece is just very, very special. I hope you recognize that yourself.
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Date: 3/13/2023 6:36:00 AM
Thank you Jaymee - timing is everything I think and I've been having a tough time and had the nice day I talked about at the same time I saw the poetry prompt. I'm making an industry out of being uncomfortable honest en route to getting over some stuff. Thank you for your incredibly kind words
Date: 3/13/2023 5:36:00 AM
A wonderful poem and a well deserved podium place Congratulations.
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Date: 3/13/2023 5:59:00 AM
Thanks Wen, I appreciate you taking the time to comment. There's such a blurred line between was is and isn't poetry and it's interesting to explore:)

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