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Bottle Garden Poetry Contest

Self contained, keep outside out Thrive inside, never fear a drought Rely on no-one as have world of mine Myself, I must, keep safe, enshrine Bottle garden, encapsulated beauty held Gaze within, all other thoughts expelled With petrichor a constant state Redolent of missing fate

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/8/2023 2:14:00 PM

A powerful write. Good Luck. Have a blessed weekend...............

Di11y Da11y
Date: 7/8/2023 3:13:00 PM

Thank you Paula x

Jan Allison

Date: 7/8/2023 2:24:00 AM

Hi Dilly I'm glad you didnt bottle it and wrote for the contest. I'm working on my very last entry ever and will pull my 'away in an asylum' entry which was the original theme. hugs jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 7/8/2023 2:39:00 AM

well i can guarantee i will get an N/A lol

Di11y Da11y
Date: 7/8/2023 2:28:00 AM

Yes I'm sure I'll get an NA but I thought I'd do it anyway for 8 lines. I think I nailed it to be fair (haha strange confidence from me!) so it'll be interesting to see who wins