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Bird Haiku

rainy afternoon - a migratory bird chirps near the hospital

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Date: 8/5/2020 10:28:00 PM
Poignant haiku Ashesh. Some much said in the spaces. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/4/2020 10:11:00 PM
Some iconic words such as migratory and hospital add a gravitas to your brief vignette, perfectly capturing a moment in time. Well done, Ashesh and congratulations on your win.
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Date: 8/4/2020 12:50:00 PM
Brilliant example of metaphors and layered interpretations Ashesh. It touches the reader's heart yet leaves it looking for answers. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/4/2020 6:40:00 AM
Well done, the use of a heavily charged word 'hospital' ensures the reader fills in the gaps for a successful haiku ~ opening it to a multitude of personalized interpretations. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 8/4/2020 5:41:00 AM
for the nature of the Haiku is to capture a moment and this one does it beautifully.
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Date: 7/23/2020 11:47:00 PM
wonderful.....allegorically the bird, I think, is soul of the dead body........
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