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Bilocation

trace elements of here and there mingled/mangled/tousled/tangled knots and rifts and linear gifts so many teasers to unscramble bilocation, thy location if that were a thing unequivocally not I fear oh how to these tangibles we cling trace. tangle. gift. wrangle with all three release ideas, as sentience clears presence prescience unlocks years lines of enquiry are left unlooked just a single thread to which we're hooked

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Date: 1/27/2024 3:17:00 AM
The /ngle/ sounds in this poem match the wrangling. I also love the flip of tangible and tangle, and the chiming sounds in the last stanza that leave me on a single thread of the puzzle. Fun :)
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Date: 1/29/2024 9:37:00 AM
Thank you Jeanette, I decided to throw caution to the wind with the idea of form with this one :)
Date: 1/24/2024 8:06:00 PM
what a potent piece of work this is - meter, flow, tempo - great
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Date: 1/25/2024 12:53:00 AM
I think disregarding the rules of form can create something different sometimes, I wasn't sure it worked but quite liked he feel. Thank you for your supportive words of encouragement
Date: 1/24/2024 6:51:00 PM
Poem reads like tribal drums that are sending messages to the heavens. These sounds of familiar words make ripples in our static brains.
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Date: 1/25/2024 12:51:00 AM
Ooh I love this comment!

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