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I remember floating through you the gentleness of you letting me nobody talking at me just a breeze of conversation you, a summer day me, a little rain cloud

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Jan Allison

Date: 4/12/2025 5:02:00 AM

beautiful indeed Di11y many congrats:-) hugs jan

Di11y Da11y
Date: 4/12/2025 5:04:00 AM

Aww thanks Jan! I let a bit of nostalgia drift over and this little poem appeared. So delighted to place :)

Ink Empress

Date: 4/10/2025 10:56:00 PM

Ah this deserved the first place win! Its so evocative! And brilliant brevity! Congratulations !!!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 4/10/2025 11:35:00 PM

Thanks Ink, so pleased with this placement for my little poem :)

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 4/10/2025 7:44:00 PM

Beautiful. Phenomena in noumena. Congratulations on you4 well deserved top win, DD

Di11y Da11y
Date: 4/10/2025 10:53:00 PM

Aww cute comment Seeker! Thank you so much for alerting me to this win and your kind words :)

Ink Empress

Date: 4/1/2025 11:46:00 AM

“ you a summer breeze me a little rain cloud” thats cute! I love that! How gently youv described each other. I would say i am thunder haha not a little rain cloud maybe a heavy one! I love the softness and delicate nature of your word weaving here! This will do well on an AP contest for sure, as it’s evocative and seamless! Pleasure reading this heartfelt gem flowing with nostalgia!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 4/2/2025 1:03:00 AM

Ha, I haven't asked for confirmation I was just a little rain cloud lol. This was just a little sweet one that popped into my head. It's nice there's a contest that suits these short poems. Thank you for your kind words :)