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As Autumn's Breeze

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Summer languid daydreaming stance is over.
Cooler breezes blow, and robins fear the coming blizzards.
Mighty autumn begins its reign by disburdening trees
Heavy with their many seasoned leaves of various hues.

Soon white fluffy flakes of snow will start to precipitate 
As children shriek and chortle, making snowballs,
While others engineer a snowman just for laughs.

As father chops the wood prepared for days
When cold Winter starts to spread its cold.
Inside the house mother prepares her famous lunch.
The pumpkin soup smells of pure delicacy,
Warm thick brown morsels dipped in the warm soup,
Ah that spicy essence, a balm to thaw numb extremities.

Despite the icicles that form on our window panes,
The lake can only produce dangerous thin ice.
Skating is off limits as notices appear everywhere,
A harbinger of doom with skulls and prohibition.

Anticipated winter’s wrath shows its might, as landscapes 
Look threadbare since no flowers bloom, while some swans 
Fly away to warmer climes, leaving behind them sullen gloom.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 10/29/2019 8:35:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD
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Date: 10/24/2019 6:18:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD, Victor!
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Date: 10/22/2019 11:38:00 AM
Wonderful season in a picture of a gifted painter and poet.Congratulation.
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Date: 10/20/2019 7:29:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful as always Victor. You sure know how to turn a phrase. The picture you paint here is like a Norman Rockwell painting. I love it. Great job as is your usual. God Bless, JB
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Date: 10/19/2019 3:33:00 PM
Hi Victor, this is such a wonderful write Victor. How I do love the Autumn and the winter. I love the content of this excellent write, Victor. Belated congratulations on your Poem Of The Day honour with this creatively, excellent write. Have a wonderful weekend. Your friend always....Mike. A Fav.
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Date: 10/19/2019 9:08:00 AM
Missed this one...Congratulations Victor on your POTD...
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Date: 10/18/2019 2:06:00 PM
Hi Victor, Autumn for me is a beautiful season but for many who have harsh winters, it is not a pleasant prospect however, you have painted a creative, warm poem of memories that you recall with this freezing season. Congratulations dear friend on POTD - a much deserved honor. Hope this winter is not too cruel! Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 10/16/2019 9:18:00 AM
A mighty Autumn paving the way for a harsh winter could only be tamed by the warmth and love shared by souls.. I so much enjoyed your perception of the seasons in the absence of Spring.. A beautiful poetry deserving the honour and recognition.. Congratulations, Victor, on your POTD! Happy to see you here.. my warmest regards and blessings.
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Date: 10/16/2019 5:19:00 AM
Winter has already hit in places north so the weathermen say on TV but we still have some warmth in the south but starting tomorrow the thermometer is suppose to drop but not quite freezing yet. Your poem reminded of those winter days in some of the lines. We usually don't have frozen streams or lakes here most years. Thanks for your visits to my page. Sara
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Date: 10/16/2019 4:36:00 AM
A very lovely poem that is so deserving of your POTD honor Victor. Congratulations! xxoo
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Date: 10/16/2019 3:43:00 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/15/2019 9:45:00 PM
As Seasons change, and Moments rearrange. We are reminded Who is in Control. You have painted such beautiful images with Your Words. Winter does leave us in Complete Awe. Congratulations Victor, on Poem of the Day. Now, you have me craving Hot Chocolate with tiny Marshmallows. Yummy!!! :) Brandy
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Date: 10/15/2019 9:35:00 PM
Victor, congratulations on POTD with this beautifully penned poem, a very deserving honor ~
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Date: 10/15/2019 6:48:00 PM
Hi Victor, This is so lovely. The picture you created with words is breathtaking. You caused me long for the "Autumn" season. Your talent never ceases to amaze me. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/15/2019 5:49:00 PM
such poetic flair which is rightly honored by a POTD award... a delight to read you, victor.. huggs
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Date: 10/15/2019 5:27:00 PM
such a beautiful seasonal write Victor many congrats on POTD, I was only saying to hubby today that I must try making pumpkin soup this year and now I've read the poem I simply must do it, you've tickled my taste buds!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/15/2019 3:11:00 PM
Excellent depiction of the season, victor. Nice and homey too. I love orange soups! like squash and pumpkin.
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Date: 10/15/2019 12:36:00 PM
A beautiful Autumn poem, and a perfect write for POTD. (The soup sounds simply delicious.) ~ Beryl
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Date: 10/15/2019 12:14:00 PM
Hey Victor, congrats on POTD. This was fantastic. I love the story here and the picture you created of the seasonal change and the hardships that come along with it. The ending was lonely but the poem itself was filled with warmth.
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Date: 10/15/2019 12:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD. You painted a beautiful picture with your words. I wish I had a cup of hot homemade pumpkin soup. I love fall........
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Date: 10/15/2019 9:36:00 AM
Well, look at you! Back this morning to congratulate you for writing such a glorious poem.
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Date: 10/15/2019 9:35:00 AM
congratulations on your POTD Victor :) hugs
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Date: 10/15/2019 7:56:00 AM
I am finding new appreciation for these once dreaded seasons, appreciation padded by pleasurable poems like this one. Lovely write dear poet. Congratulations on POTD vb! xomo <3
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Date: 10/15/2019 7:37:00 AM
A beautiful write of seasons Victor, well written, Congrats on POTD..
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Date: 10/15/2019 7:35:00 AM
Perfect poem for autumn! This is a FAVE for me! Great job! Congrats on POTD!
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