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For Silent One's contest - how are you feeling in 17 words.
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lenticular fluidity: anxious/fine change of view requires gentle shift of vision yet great precision to maintain

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Date: 10/17/2023 10:20:00 AM
On a literal note - that's how I felt when I had my own lens replaced with a multifocus lens. A little getting used to. LOL Nice Di11y - congratulations! :)
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Date: 10/17/2023 11:04:00 AM
Haha thanks Linda! I'd felt rather clever coming up with this one - lenticular pictures are so fascinating... Hope you are used to your glasses now :)
Date: 10/16/2023 11:15:00 AM
Congrats on your write. I think many people today feel anxiety
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Date: 10/16/2023 11:34:00 AM
Thank you - it's pretty entrenched in society
Date: 10/15/2023 8:35:00 AM
Hope you are feeling better today.. Congratulations on your win in the contest.
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Date: 10/15/2023 9:02:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 10/10/2023 2:47:00 AM
- Our eyes give us over 90% of all information about the world around us... an important sense to take care of, D.D. ... skillfully written - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 10/10/2023 2:59:00 AM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise - perception is everything x

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