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Another Dream

I dreamt of you again last night.

I held you with all my might.
Tears flowed from my face,
as i yearned to never leave your embrace.
The smell of your skin, the taste of your tears
the sound of your laughter, joy without fear. 
That moment a treasure, 
but the treasure was a dream.

If dreams were reality and reality was a dream,
I would sail right to heaven to be redeemed.
I would walk on water with you by my side,
in eternal bliss we would forever abide.
But dreams are just streams of healing at night,
this wound has been one of the hardest to fight.
And I will keep dreaming of you till the stars have no light,
for you were my baby but the times were not right.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/17/2017 10:25:00 PM
Hold on to your dream, Hani, and make it a reality but remember "time waits for no man" and love is a gift. Tragic but lovely poem. However, I think you could classify it as a couplet.
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Date: 11/9/2016 7:43:00 PM
Hani this is a beautiful poem that you wrote.I enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 10/28/2016 6:10:00 PM
Very nice write, Hani, enjoyed reading. You asked about what I thought thank you for asking there are others that are better versed in poetry.... Enclosed rhyme (or enclosing rhyme) is the rhyme scheme "abba" (that is, where the first and fourth lines, and the second and third lines rhyme). Hope that helps Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/25/2016 9:49:00 AM
Another great write my friend!
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Date: 10/24/2016 8:09:00 PM
Very deep. Love the way the words flow in this Poem very intense
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Date: 10/24/2016 7:18:00 PM
Very powerful work. I could feel the lust and desire.
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