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Aging of Pain

ache lingers close a soft breath where pain once roared— gentle thief of hurt

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Date: 4/10/2025 3:33:00 PM
Reminds me of the lyrics to the song "Old Man Time".
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Mickey Grubb
Date: 4/10/2025 4:48:00 PM
Jimmy Durante? Thanks for reading and commenting.
Date: 4/10/2025 10:14:00 AM
A graceful senryu on the pains of aging, poet ~
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Mickey Grubb
Date: 4/10/2025 2:18:00 PM
Thank you, I Am Anaya, for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated.

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