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the river spoke to me ride my current to the sea join my adventure

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




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Date: 2/28/2023 3:37:00 AM
Bill Bill Bill. Good Morning. Oh the waters oceans and rivers speak to me. It has been in my soul since forever because I grew up spending time vacationing at beaches. I will forever love her adventure. Yes, your words are true that it is an adventure. It was an honor turning to your page this morning. May today be a good day. Blessings always. (smile)
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Bill Baker
Date: 3/5/2023 10:51:00 AM
Thank you, Lisa. I'm glad you've experienced the adventure water offers. Sara and I have enjoy canoe trips down the river for a picnic many times. I hope your life is filled with adventures, my friend. Happy times are coming your way, Bill
Date: 5/20/2022 11:26:00 AM
The sea, of course yes, we are all allured to the beckoning sea, for it is full of adventure but sometimes a risky venture. I love watching the sea, it is wise like the trees. WELL penned my friend, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 5/20/2022 5:40:00 PM
It is a joy to experience but can be dangerous. I hope your week is going well. Hugs, Bill
Date: 5/16/2022 1:00:00 AM
"to the sea" - why not? Okay!
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Bill Baker
Date: 5/16/2022 2:51:00 PM
Had to go somewhere. :-) Thanks for the comments my friend, Bill
Date: 5/15/2022 8:00:00 PM
Sweet words of allure...
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Bill Baker
Date: 5/16/2022 12:22:00 AM
Thank you, Gershon. Bill
Date: 5/14/2022 7:09:00 PM
Lovely, Bill!
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Bill Baker
Date: 5/16/2022 12:22:00 AM
Thanks for the visit, Kim
Date: 5/14/2022 1:09:00 PM
love the metaphor carefully hidden within in this simple haiku. Life speaks to us and asks us to be adventurous.
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Bill Baker
Date: 5/14/2022 4:01:00 PM
My favorite writing bear, Cuddles. Thanks for the visit. Bill

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