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red blood-clouds rain heavy on her snow-skin pain a bruise blizzard her dark-storm dread his temper tempest read
30 June 2021 Ninette contest Sponsor Caren Krutsinger

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Date: 8/25/2021 7:36:00 AM
This is a very beautiful Ninette with a beautiful metaphor. Further, I would like to thank you very much for giving me an opportunity to take part in your contest. Thank you very much also for your encouraging words.
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Date: 8/25/2021 7:35:00 AM
This is a very beautiful Ninette with a beautiful metaphor. Further, I would like to thank you very much for giving me an opportunity to take part in your contest. Thank you very much also for your encouraging words.
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Date: 8/16/2021 3:10:00 PM
I could have sworn I read this and commented but there is no comment of mine here previously . This is outstanding metaphor, Charlotte
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Date: 8/11/2021 9:48:00 PM
A most necessary message in times of power + intimidation. So well penned. Cheers Brian
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Date: 8/10/2021 1:35:00 AM
A season of abuse, will next year be different, like the changing seasons, no.
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Date: 8/14/2021 8:08:00 AM
you like the hard hitting ones
Date: 7/19/2021 6:32:00 PM
Powerful poem!
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Date: 6/30/2021 1:20:00 PM
so few words paint a vivid picture, and i have said before your rape poem is one of the most powerful pieces i have ever read, hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/30/2021 11:17:00 AM
Charlotte, Susan has said it so well below. I could not agree more with her on the searing imagery of your verse.
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Date: 6/30/2021 8:47:00 AM
Dear Charlotte, your mighty pen spills potent poignancy with incredible force and searing imagery and metaphor. The use of color is stunning. The tragic storm-force analogy is as provocative as it is poetically beautiful. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan
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