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A whale of a time

Jeff he was a good animal dentist Pets of all kinds were on his event list He treated dogs and big cats Horses and even some rats When shown a blue whale he had to resist 10-10-7-7-10

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Date: 11/22/2022 2:44:00 AM
A great limerick (I love them), very funny and just the correct rhythm, more, more!
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Wendy Horder
Date: 11/24/2022 8:57:00 AM
Thanks Terry, this one was "poor" at best. Hopefully my attempts at Limericks will get better.
Date: 11/8/2022 11:29:00 AM
A fun write Wendy! :)
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Wendy Horder
Date: 11/8/2022 6:32:00 PM
A sad first attempt at writing a Limerick, Linda. LOL It could only get better !! Reading all those wonderful ones Rico writes didn't seem to teach me anything !!!
Date: 11/7/2022 6:00:00 AM
Did you intentionally choose "Jeff"?
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Wendy Horder
Date: 11/7/2022 9:34:00 AM
No it just popped into my head, but Paul Callus suggested he be named Jonah, and I wish I had thought of that ! It is so much better.
Date: 11/6/2022 1:43:00 AM
Cute as Wendy….Debx
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Wendy Horder
Date: 11/6/2022 3:06:00 AM
Also silly as... but fun as... l look forward to reading your encouraging messages Deb. Thank you.
Date: 11/6/2022 1:20:00 AM
This is witty, cute and with a very suitable title, Wendy. Good thing the dentist was not named Jonah.... Regards // paul
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Wendy Horder
Date: 11/6/2022 3:03:00 AM
See Paul, I need a mentor, I should have thought of calling him Jonah ! I thought it was time I tried my hand at a variety of different styles of poetry. A long way of mastering it, but its fun. I use the competitions to give me ideas. Thank you for your comments.
Date: 11/6/2022 12:04:00 AM
And who can blame him? Lovely limerick.
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Wendy Horder
Date: 11/6/2022 12:26:00 AM
A bit of silliness but they say variety is the spice of life, so I thought I would try my hand at something different. Thanks for your comment Victor.