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A Loving Kiss

In a silent beckoning From the hearts loving call Where a simple day of beauty falls A white rose opens So pure so free And wings of love In you In me Take flight beyond To drift so free Each delicate petal Of silken love In wind blown dream Rise above Where painted gardens In rainbow mist Flouish beneath A loving kiss

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/30/2017 7:12:00 AM
Brilliant piece!! Congrats Rick, for your well-deserved third placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 5/29/2017 4:27:00 PM
Rick, this is an absolutely lovely poem--the use of imagery and metaphor, etc. Congrats on your well-deserved win! I'll add to favorites! Janice
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Date: 5/29/2017 3:43:00 PM
Not only are the words beautiful, Rick but the way they are centered makes it look as sweet as each delicate petal you write of.
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Date: 3/29/2017 2:21:00 PM
Terrific lyric Rick, so well done...
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Date: 3/28/2017 10:17:00 PM
Beautiful imagery and so romantic! Great write, Rick! Blessings, Kim
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