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A Gurgling Brook

long tree limbs stretching over gurgling brook flowing minnows are dashing I sit on the bank observing nature’s beauty a calming moment

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Date: 3/4/2022 7:33:00 AM
Such a lovely imagery of the gurgling brook Bill...Enjoyed reading your Haiku...God bless...~ Ani
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Bill Baker
Date: 3/8/2022 4:28:00 PM
Thank you, Ani, for your kind comments. Hugs, Bill
Date: 2/20/2022 1:06:00 PM
I love the melodies gurgling brook makes. Liked your piece.
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Date: 2/20/2022 5:31:00 PM
Thank you. I like the gurgling sound of a brook, or when I take a shower sometimes. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Date: 1/31/2022 2:19:00 PM
Yes, that is a precious time with nature and God. I am glad that you wrote this one because it took me to the creek one more time. Your visits to my page are refreshing. Sara
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Bill Baker
Date: 1/31/2022 5:14:00 PM
Thank you for the visit, I know you been here on poetry soup a while and have many friends, so I count it as a blessing when you visit, read, and comment on my poetry. Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill
Date: 1/21/2022 9:27:00 AM
love this. when i was younger they would find me in the woods or down by the creek!
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Date: 1/22/2022 1:03:00 PM
I always liked to explore; the creek was always a fun experience. Glad you had some similar adventures, Karen. Hugs, Bill
Date: 1/20/2022 1:01:00 PM
very nice and idyllic scene
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Bill Baker
Date: 1/20/2022 5:23:00 PM
I do like nature's natural beauty. Likewise, I love serenity for reflection and meditation. Smiles ~ blessings my friend, Bill
Date: 1/19/2022 6:52:00 AM
WoW! Bill, You created such a “ serene” scene with your haikus. Well done- Alexis
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Date: 1/19/2022 9:38:00 PM
Thanks for the visit and comment, Alexis. smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Date: 1/18/2022 10:26:00 PM
There is nothing as peaceful and enjoyable as being in a beautiful natural location. A lovely haiku! :)
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Date: 1/19/2022 9:38:00 PM
Thank you, Evelyn. The ones you write about are always lovely. Your Texas friend, Bill
Date: 1/18/2022 12:23:00 PM
I really like this haiku combo, Bill. Nothing is so relaxing as a gurgling brook, especially if your chores are done and you have no pressing issues!
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Date: 1/18/2022 4:20:00 PM
Chores are done, that's a big ask. lol But so true, it does enhance the experience when you mind can join in the relaxing. Your friend, Bill
Date: 1/18/2022 11:55:00 AM
What a great visual~Norman Rockwell would be proud! Blessings,Paulette
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Bill Baker
Date: 1/18/2022 4:18:00 PM
wow! great thought. Made me smile a little, Paulette. I needed an extra smile today, thanks. Smiles and blessings, Bill
Date: 1/18/2022 11:49:00 AM
A whisper of joy. Love it. God bless you friend. Love, Gina
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Bill Baker
Date: 1/18/2022 4:17:00 PM
So kind, are your comments, my friend. Thank you, Gina, for encouraging me to continue trying new forms and sharing my poetry. You're the best, Bill
Date: 1/18/2022 9:01:00 AM
A lovely nature scene Bill, a very tranquil place. Tom
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Date: 1/18/2022 9:56:00 AM
Thanks, Tom. A peace thought turned into a Haiku this morning. Bill