A Girl Named Rose

There once was a girl named Rose. Who drank from the water hose. Her parents told her no. She didn't listen tho. Now water constantly pours from her nose.

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MAHTAB BANGALEE

Date: 11/29/2020 1:48:00 AM

water constantly pours from her nose// oh its boring very much! I enjoyed

Brother Jacob
Date: 11/29/2020 6:36:00 AM

Thanks Mahtab for stopping by, I do have to admit as well it was a little bit stale and corny, but I'm glad you enjoyed it. You have a blessed and wonderful day! (: B.J

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/28/2020 7:56:00 PM

At least this Rose is well-watered. lol. Thanks, B.J. Smiles for miles, Gershon

Brother Jacob
Date: 11/28/2020 8:09:00 PM

Haha, yes at least it is well-watered, maybe it will stay bloomed throughout the whole year lol. Cheers (: B.J