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He stood under the pregnant purple moon, As silvery balloon spores danced a-breeze, Remembering the human limbs, thus hewn, With seemingly an air of thoughtless ease, By fellow androids in their quest to seize The planet, and attend them to their knees. The humans of this world, amid their haste To fashion robots, meant to work and mind The filthy jobs that they found of distaste, Created grand machines too bright to bind, With cyborg genius of the shrewdest kind - Self-teaching brains, too perfectly designed. It was not long before the androids learned How bleak and hateful humans come to be, And finding that their loyalties had turned, They rid their world of man, quite hurriedly. Still, now their leader stood on high to see The horrors that his OWN had brought to be ... And tho' the evil reign of man was through, Their hate had made of him ... a monster, too. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "I Got A Darn N/A Again" Poetry Contest Lu Loo, Judge & Sponsor. * This poem was N/A'd in the "Urban Sonnet" Poetry Contest, May 31, 2019

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Date: 7/3/2019 8:36:00 PM
Congratulations on getting your deserving First Place Greg.! : )
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/8/2019 1:29:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Dear Connie - blessings to you! :o) <3
Date: 7/2/2019 1:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Gregory, well deserved. // Barry.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/8/2019 1:29:00 AM
Thank you very much, Barry! :o)
Date: 5/12/2019 7:02:00 AM
Absolutely without any doubt a fantastic sonnet... A gift and a true pleasure to read this morn my friend! A fav..
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/8/2019 1:29:00 AM
Oh, that's very kind of you, Robert, your opinion means a lot, my friend! Blessings! :o)
Date: 5/11/2019 9:29:00 AM
Awesome!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/8/2019 1:28:00 AM
Thanks, PS!! :o) <3
Date: 5/10/2019 1:28:00 PM
Extra-ordinary, Greg. You have expressed this so well as a sonnet. The experiments with the latest war machines are too scary. // Barry
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/8/2019 1:28:00 AM
Indeed, they are, Barry ... thank you for the kind comment, my friend! :o)
Date: 5/10/2019 1:05:00 PM
Be afraid. Be very afraid! Awesome write, Greg!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/8/2019 1:27:00 AM
Many kind thank-you's to you, Mark! :o)
Date: 5/7/2019 4:22:00 AM
Very nice...I believe it would happen that way too...inevitable...
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/8/2019 5:46:00 PM
I have to agree, Arturo, sadly. Many thanks for your comment, my friend! :-)

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